Reviews for Raven's Afternoon in the Park
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
You did well, this was an enjoyable story.
u r awesome chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Aw! This story was fantastic! It was so sweet! Great job! I really enjoyed reading it and it was super sweet. Keep up the wonderful writing.

u r awesome
Animegod 197 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Really nice. Loved it.
Aeyame chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
It's very sweet.
Sofia Michelle chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
love it!
ida4444 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Cute! I usually like stories in third-person but I think this is actually better in first-person. I enjoyed it!
Sergeant Daniel chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This was cute. I love it:D
mischievous5100 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
That was cute! :D I loved it!
Harmonious Wolf chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This is a cute little one shot ;) I love the part when the toddler was so entralled with Raven and the butterfly
numbuh13m chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Kwl, it waz cute