|Reviews for Neither Here nor There|
| Witch by Midnight chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
great story...i loved the old women. one problem what does maab mean
| LinBates chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Loved the story!
Always wondered what Percival's attitude toward magic would be!
Unless you or someone you loved suffered at the hands of someone with magic, I would imagine most people would find magic to be good or bad depending on who used it and for what!
Keep them coming and share the magic!
| Emachinescat chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Loved the old lady! Brilliant writing!
| PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Excellent job! This was amazing, and I really liked the old woman in this. Fiesty, haha.
| NerdBurga chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Haha I absolutely loved your OC, she was awesome, and the actual story was great too - very sweet. Really enjoyed this :)
| FlyingLovegood123 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I like Pervical, and wished we had seen more of him in the series. Thank you for writing!
| chele the original chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Great story I like it!
| Weaving Bard chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I'd love to read a:
Since Uther banned magic and made other rulers follow suit.. the natural world goes crazy. Envoys from as far as Japan start to come... but not to talk to Uther... they want to talk to Merlin.
| SoulMore chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
| Katerina Riley chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Took me a while to get it, but 'Maab' was the woman's name right? Of all the knights, I think you're right that Percival would be the one more accepting of magic. Not that Merlin has magic, just magic in general. I must say, I'm loving your fanfics :)
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Okay, this story was made by your crotchety old people. I love Percival to death, but he was a dim second to their brilliance here. I'm tearing up, it was so funny.
But, actually, Percival is pretty darned awesome himself. I loved the way you wrote this character, which I always found rather difficult because he is very much in the background of most scenes. You gave him a believable voice and his reactions to the old woman's threats and Merlin in danger and magic were brilliant.
"This was Merlin's secret, Merlin's burden, Merlin's business, and Percival was neither here nor there about magic." Best line ever.
Poor Merlin. Why is he always injured?
| Darkmiror chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Im not sure how much I liked this one only because Im not sure how much of it I believed. Merlin has never been one to quail at having to kill someone in self-defense no matter the number nor does he normally allow massive numbers of people to corner him without putting up a fight before getting attacked (especially when alone). And why would he only fight them one at a time when normally he does that whole "throw them threw the air and they pass out or die" trick? That does it nice and quick so I'm a little confused why he would be in such shock? Is it just for the sake of the fic or did you paint his reaction this way because you saw it from a different perspective or what?
Also I'm not sure Merlin would have been quite so quick to agree with Percival on him using magic. That is his greatest secret and anything short of Percival having actually seen him use magic (and even then he may have given excuses) would have gotten Merlin to confirm Percival's suspicion (in my opinion).
However, if this was just an "I liked the idea of it and went with it fic" then I liked it:) Sorry I'm a character nazi and I can only let OOC go so far for me. I also quite liked your take on Percival. I find it hard to identify his character because his isn't very well defined in the show. He's just a strong, quite, big teddy bear knight of Camelot. You don't really know much of his personality but I liked how you took all that into account and made a quite believable version of him:) I really did like that:)
Is this new forum on or livejournal?
| Loopstagirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
*squeals in delight*
Oh! Perfect! Excellent! I can't think of other ways of saying it that I haven't already said over the last hour, but absolutely fantastic.
Oh...I've run out... *sad face* Can't wait to read whatever you come out with next, you have made my day!
| Windy Silvermist chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I liked this, I love when Perc finds out about Merlins magic. He's always so understanding...I love it. This scared Merlin you wrote was also fantastic. I loved him greatly and wanted to hug him. Great job!
| lifelong.reader chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
GReat Story - plesae remind me - who is Maab? I know her name but for the life of me cannot remember her story.