|Reviews for In the Arms of Her Dragon|
| Takenya chapter 14 . 4m ago
I just discovered your story and kinda fell in love with it. I read these 14 chapters in less than a day. Just couldn't stop when I knew there was another chapter waiting to be read. I saw that you're supposed to write at least 100 chapters for this story, and I can only wish you good luck for that, but I can't say that I'm complaining haha. Just wish that you won't get tired of this and decide to stop it. The fact that this story will be this long is great as you have to impose a pace between Draco and Hermione that is perfect in my opinion. They aren't jumping on each others but it isn't supper slow either. This moment in a relationship is in my opinion one of the best -when the future couple is getting to know each other, when they are trying to do things to make this relationship progress without being certain that it'll be okay for the other. It's a real dance, a beautiful and exciting one, and I love the fact that you're taking your time to show it and explore it. Usually authors tend to forget about this part and I think it's really too bad. Anyway. I was laughing so hard in some chapters, especially with the "PEEVES!" scream that Malfoy yelled in the library. I burst into laughing while I was in the subway. Way to be remarked by people, I think I even scared some of them as I couldn't stop laughing. Just imagining the scene was killing me. But it was good, really good.
I love how Draco and Hermione, they are great together. Their discussions are pretty awesome. I also love how Malfoy shows a new aspect of his personality when he's with Granger, he's more open, funny and careless.
The only thing that bugged me a bit was when I read one of your note at the end of a chapter and that you told us there would be another war -or at least fight- coming, bringing along deaths and all. I would have liked a story without it as I think all the characters have been through enough, especially at their age. But at the same time, as your story is going to be that long, it can also be a good idea. I just hope this won't be a huge part of the story or at least it won't become the main subject of it, you know?
Anyway, except this, I really love your story and I can only hope that you'll update soon? Please, pretty please?
Oh and Happy Easter!
Have a nice week an I hope to hear from you and/or this story soon! xxx
P.S: I'm French, so I hope there isn't a lot of mistakes in my review. Okay, I'll stop talking (or writing in this case) now. Bye!
| DisneyKd4 chapter 14 . 4/16
Shit, I don't know why I started reading this when I knew it wasn't finished. -_- Anyways, I think it would be a good idea to bring up the idea of a Death Eater trying to bring back Voldemort again and maybe slip in the Daily Prophet and Skeeter because there is more to the Wizarding World than Hogwarts, (just a suggestion) :) Ummmm what else? Oh, you should have them go to the party as witch and wizard, but have Draco comment that the Wizard of Oz was written by a Witch to be read for both muggles and wizards :) A few grammar and misspellings here and there, but besides that, great job and please don't drop this story and please update soon!
| rocknroll419 chapter 14 . 4/16
Awesome! Cant wait for the next update!XD
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/13
Oh please update. It's been forever!
| Motoko The Red Queen chapter 13 . 4/15
awwwwwwwn, you must update this wonderful story!
| demigoddesswarrior0133 chapter 14 . 4/14
Please write more please this is so good so far
| flithymudblood chapter 14 . 4/14
Ahhhhh you're killing me! Up date please ! Loooooove you
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/12
More please? Sooo good right now
| berrysweetme chapter 14 . 4/12
I couldn't help reading over that last line over and over again thinking I was dreaming. I really want to strangle you now for leaving a huge cliffhanger like that. But if I did then you wouldn't be able to write the next chapters to the story. Soo just hurry up and write the next chapter, okay? An then i might think of forgiving you! x
| samyrafj chapter 14 . 4/12
WHAAAAT? WHAAAAT? WHAAAAAT?
This is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! Your story! I AM A write so well, congratulations!
I am very happy to know that you want a very long story, but I am sad because is not written yet, and every chapter is a heart atack, because I [and I think everyone that reads it] want to know what happens int he story.
I like the part that the boys know about Draco-Hermione, but what about the girls? usually the girls sense it, and they are clueless of the situation.
WHat happened with Ginny being chaser? She was a very good quidditch player on the books...
and the last... I think the idea of hermione and draco working together in classes is a good way to make them together in front of the school... right? ahsushausahusasa
sorry, I am very ansious and keep talking what is NONE of my busines... its YOUR story, not mine. sorry about that... but I just cannot let this coments inside me... HAHHAHAA I had to let it out.
Please, please, please, pretty pleeeeeease update soon. I am looking foward! ;)
| Enn chapter 14 . 4/10
I was positively giddy while reading this story! Please please please update soon! _ how long do you usually take to update a chapter? Just curious..really. and you my friend have made it to my favorite dramione fanfictions authors list. ;)
| sassygirl9811 chapter 14 . 4/5
Reading that last line literally had me squealing! Please please please puhleeez update again soon!
| RicherThanChocolate chapter 3 . 4/4
OMG that was so sickeningly sweet I was squeelling all thought out the end. And both hermione and malfoy were so in character. Malfoy especially, the way he fianlly admits that he misses her. WOW you guys are really talented writers ")
| rebeccailene chapter 14 . 4/2
Can I get your Autograph...:)
| DraconisMoonstone chapter 14 . 4/1
Oh my gosh.. I am so hooked! This is such an amazing story!:))))) update sooooon!