Reviews for Journey 2: Mysterious Love
Andrew chapter 5 . 4/7
That was pretty good
Hope chapter 9 . 2/11
Hi, Um well I was looking for Journey 1 fanfic and I couldn't find it. I was just wondering if you had changed your mind or something... well anywho, the story was amazing. Personally I loved it. Thakn you for writing it.
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 9 . 2/1
loved it
Gina Narbonne chapter 3 . 1/5
I love this story so much...
MischievousAngel0923 chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
from what I've read you have a great background set up for your oc. If your trying to make it more original all you really have to do is create your own scenes that aren't in the movie... maybe extend the time frame a bit so that your oc can develop deeper relationships, have a few serious talks, have her tell her own adventure stories to sean, that should separate her plenty. Like I said, you already gave her a unique background, most writers don't even try that and just technically change Kalani's name to another. Honestly, her entrance itself is original, you didn't have her swing into action but have her stumble upon the guest as she was doing her chores. Trust me your story is better than you realize. However I feel that if you do go back and work on the story again as you feel you should do, you'll find yourself giving the story and its characters a lot more depth and development.

I personally can not wait to see what you come up with in your rewrite and I am sure it will be something amazing. If you want some one to Beta it I would be glad to help. Let me know!
LostInTrack chapter 8 . 6/8/2013
Rewrite the story! It would be good! :)))
GrimReaperGirl14 chapter 8 . 5/31/2013
good story
SynisterSciFiFreak chapter 4 . 4/27/2013
Really cool how you have made Sean so protective of danny. Cant wait to read the next chapter
SynisterSciFiFreak chapter 3 . 4/27/2013
Really like this chapter. Thought it was really cute :)
SynisterSciFiFreak chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
Love this chapter! Cant wait to c what happens
SynisterSciFiFreak chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Love the idea you have for this story. Thought the first chapter was really cool. And the letter was really sweet :)
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 8 . 3/25/2013
loved it
Guest chapter 7 . 12/28/2012
Snap that's good u should write a lem of Sean and kalani
justdancer3 chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
I loved this story! It was so good!
mamao chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
YES! YES PLEASE!
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