|Reviews for The Hidden Stone|
| DBack47 chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
It's a bit different to get things from the dragon side of the life, excellent, and even more uncommon that we get something from Glader and Oromis. Good luck writing!
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
This is fairly interesting, I hope you update frequently.
| 3 is my penname chapter 3 . 2/1/2013
This is really good! I like it a lot, and you're really good at writing! Please, PLEASE, don't give up on this fic! That would be like if someone ripped out all the pages of a good book (perhaps Inheritance) when the reader has just started! Not that I expect this fic to bad as long as Inheritance. That would be super long. Also, I have some constructive criticism. You're doing a pretty good job with keeping Oromis and Glaedr in character, but it would be better if they used oldspeak, like bigger words and "aye" instead of yes. Just a sugestion. Keep writing! Pwease?
the girl who is constantly day-dreaming about the inheritance cycle
Also known as Smiley Face.
| dblackdire chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
I think this is a good chapter. Short but I liked the dialouge between Glaedr and his Rider. Very well written.
About writer's block, it happens to us all my friend and there's but one cure ... write, write and write.
Try just writing the next chapter down, don't worry so much what to write just write and let the words flow out of you. After that read, re-read and revise the parts that don't fit. One item that helps immensly with writer's block is knowing where your taking the story. Have a main plot in mind, if you don't already.
That's about all the advice I can give, hope it helps :)
In any case I think you're doing just fine.
| robzbrony chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
you should call it farok if its male syreen if its female good chapter by the way
| mjkcsk chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
| dblackdire chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
This is a good start, I like it! Can't offer much to the question of whehter you're keeping them in character. I'd need to see more ... (hint, hint :)).
Anyway, from what you have written I'm hooked. Glaedr as a father sounds very interesting. I encourage you to continue. I'll be following this story :)
| robzbrony chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
yes i think that this story has a lot of potential im a new writerr myself and id lik to see where you can tack this
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This would be awesome!