Reviews for Call of the Phoenix
aye mon chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
his "new best friend" is drunk.
aye mon chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
who is Roan's dad?
P.S: if you see a comment by *sweet 16* that's my twin sis
Guest chapter 15 . 4/18/2013
I love this story soooo much! Please update soon
Frick6101719 chapter 15 . 4/17/2013
Three reviews on one story in one day? Yeeeh buddy. I superly like this. I'm one of those annoyingly ocd-picky readers when it comes to fanfics, and some of them are genuinely just too painful to continue. Not this one though, (obvi) since I made it all the way to the end and am now dying with anticipation. Small suggestion. There is literally like NO evidence to support Glimmer's theory about Cato and Katniss, and I was like "wait where is this coming from" when I read her musings to Katniss. All I'm saying is that your tension is only romantic to us because we are faithful Catoniss shippers. Otherwise you have done a very thorough job of giving us a tense, though platonic, relationship. In short, don't rush it. It's delicate, and is going to take work (you just as much as the two of them!)
If it was me (it's not, so you don't have to take my advice) I would get them to have a normal talk again, bringing them to somewhere neutral, and THEN let Glimmer go all... Glimmer. Btw, LOVE how she's the matchmaker instead of the "let me sleep on you" moron of the movie. And her backstory? I died. Just died.
You're welcome for the novel. Chatterboxes around the world unite!
Stay gold Ponyboy. Stay gold.
Frick6101719 chapter 11 . 4/17/2013
Okay, I have wicked respect for you. What you said up top was beautiful, even if you didn't mean to write it like something as genuinely sweet as you did. And isn't that the point of The Hunger Games? Death is brutal, and it shouldn't be for entertainment, especially not the death of children. Major kudos to you for that, even when it's not story-related and even when everyone likes to pick fights over stuff like this.
Keep your head up, and thanks for being legit.
Frick6101719 chapter 3 . 4/17/2013
I really super like this, but just watch out for your switchups. You accidentally called Rye "Peeta" when you said that he'd already left for his private session with the gamemakers.
Keep it up!
silver7612 chapter 15 . 4/15/2013
awesome ending! loved the chapter
bluephoenix65069 chapter 15 . 4/12/2013
Awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if she should just kiss Cato and get it over with. :) Keep up the great work
the one that follows chapter 15 . 4/9/2013
Like this chapter please keep writing
Guest chapter 15 . 4/8/2013
toritwilight504 chapter 15 . 4/8/2013
rochitabels chapter 15 . 4/8/2013
Hooray you updated! I am soooo happy. Please update as soon as you can coz I really love this story. You're awesome 3
Guest chapter 15 . 4/7/2013
Great Chapter! And I think you should write "Desperation"
Abigail25 chapter 15 . 4/7/2013
atheniandemiwitchonfire chapter 15 . 4/7/2013
oh my god , ITS GALE! Hahahahaha! woo took you long enough! And Finnick? This story just keeps getting better :')

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