Reviews for Call of the Phoenix
AliceMalefoy chapter 23 . 2/26/2014
I can't find my words. Well, since I'm French an not fluent, that's even harder to find the appropriate vocabary.
Yet, I have to say that it was the best story ever (Katniss/Cato) !
I'm crying, and you know why ? Because of Haymitchs death. I managed (quite well actually) not to cry through all your story, even if it was freaking close sometimes, and then BAAAAM Haymitch, my beloved Haymitch, passed out. ARGH. Teaaaars :(
But it's cool, I don't wanna kill you.. (hehe I'm such a liar, I wanna rip your throat with my bare teeth, but I'll never recover from the death of such a great author !)

ANYWAY. Your story is wonderful, you managed to humanize the Careers so well... I love you for that !
Hmmm. You killed Katniss' mum in chap 19 I think, and then she re-dies in chap 22 or so. That's quite disturbing, actually x)

Congrats, your story's a hit.

Alice.
spiffiness114 chapter 19 . 2/7/2014
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
spiffiness114 chapter 11 . 2/7/2014
Ha the moron in question
spiffiness114 chapter 8 . 2/7/2014
:'(
CoalPixie chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
I'm really enjoying the idea behind your story and I'm looking forward to reading more.
There are a few bits where you've made mistakes though in this chapter, such as saying that in two weeks 21 tributes will be dead, when it's actually 23. You also call Rye, Peeta when he goes into his individual session with the gamemakers.
Looking forward to some Katniss Cato interaction soon.
danceislife13 chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
The ending and what Rue said to Clove is so sweet. Seriously, this story is amazing but it is one big emotional rollercoaster from the super depressing parts with Rye and Coral's deaths to the really sweet endings you throw in there. I feel like I'm going to get emotional whiplash:)
danceislife13 chapter 10 . 1/27/2014
Okay normally I hate sappy stuff but I thought the ending was really cute. It feels like closure for Rye and Peeta and all of the dead tributes from the 74th Hunger Games. I think it was absolutely perfect even if it was a smidge cheesy.
danceislife13 chapter 8 . 1/27/2014
Why did you kill Coral? There was no reason that she had to die:(
danceislife13 chapter 6 . 1/27/2014
You are such a good writer and so descriptive that I actually got very emotional during Rye's death. However I do have one question, why couldn't you have kept Rye alive if the tributes were right about to be allowed to stop trying to kill each other?
Wolf9lucky chapter 25 . 1/18/2014
Great story!
Cass chapter 16 . 1/9/2014
I torture myself thinking about Cato and Marvel taking care of Roan :). The whole time I'm reading I think 'Awwww, that's such a sweet little baby, quiet and everything'

But then this... This made me think as soon as Katniss closed the door, he gave the, an evil look.

Well done.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/5/2014
This is the second time I have read this and it is as beautiful if not better than the first time I read it. It makes my heart clench and makes me want to smile at the same time. I just wished that the ending wouldn't t have been all that sad and incomplete.
kat louise chapter 25 . 1/3/2014
This is my favorite Katniss/Cato fanfiction ever. Your writing was great and the story was amazing. Good job
Guest chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
I loved Roan's pov sooo cute and sweet
nissikisses chapter 23 . 12/15/2013
I read the whole story. The story is very well-written except for the few typos. The plot was gripping, it held my attention for quite a few hours. I complete forgot I had some handouts in real life I have to study.

Great work!
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