Reviews for The Boy with the Broken Halo |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so mad that Shaw wouldn't tell him Kate's alive! That seems so unlike her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa? (Definitely did't see that one coming!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God. Oh God. Oh God. Oh God. Oh God. Oh God. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. God. :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not going to deny it, I teared up there at the end haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! I literally squealed in excitement when I read the name Jordan Shaw. Thank god! Ugh you really were toying with my emotions there for a while! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know I completely and fully hate you right now blue252! you make everything so blissfully adorable and then go and do a thing like this cliff hanger.. tisk tisk |
![]() ![]() ![]() You managed the suspense element of this PERFECTLY. Urgh, it was so great. Your Jordan was also really perfectly characterised. This was just really good and so worth any sleep deprivation that may have occurred! Great work lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe you blew the loft, even if it was just a part of it! Loved the story, I think I read it in one sitting. Thanks for a good read. |
![]() ![]() Yes you should write an epilogue. Also it would be great if with the fight on the staircase where kate finally sees Castle, you should write another chapter in Kate's point of view. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible story. fantastic from beginning to end ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! Loved the End. Loved the middle, and the beginning. Perfect fic is perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ay caramba. WOMAN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! AASDHKAJFHSAGJKFGDAJSH! *ahem* Umm. Good job. |