|Reviews for Possession|
| Queen Serenity chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Not bad. I'd like to see this continued.
You forgot a disclaimer, though, saying only the original characters re yours (it's a good rule of thumb to start with one).
Also, if this ends up with romance (hopefully it does) you may need to up the rating to at least T.
| Lara F chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I liked the way you have formatted and drafted the chapter . This has make reading enjoyable and straightforward .
What happened to her mother ?
" I don't want our first day here to be spent in the hospital " If not careful with which they will deal shortly thereafter , they will end up spending the rest of the days in a madhouse as Reinfield . X D
" This is perfect , especially for sneaking out late at night ... " What a naughty girl ! How old is she ?
Evil is lurking .