Reviews for The Curse of Renenutet
Marzipan chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Im sorry but this is a little far fetched and ridiculous. It was too formal and painful to read. Im only honest in saying the dialogue and actions of characters who would be put in that potential situation seemed forced and not at all authentic. Good try though with the Egypt mythology, not everyone is willing to tackle it;)
Kathiryn Orlinski chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I think you should continue! I love Egyptian mythology, and I think if you kept writing it would be a good story. But when Renenutet came, you should have described her appearance, like "a small woman came out of the divided rock" or something like that. I had to read that part a few times to figure what exactly happened. But otherwise, your story is very nice.