Reviews for Better
KratosDrake chapter 1 . 5/31
This is... intense. I'm so used to seeing your cheery stories when I was still an anon, but to see this side... It's fascinating. Ever thought of going to a site like Creepypasta Wiki? It is pretty nice, and it seems to feel well with this kind of writing. Gonna check the continuation sometime.
advancestars chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
This made me cry. It's so sad, but the writing was really well done. You're a great writer.
Now excuse me while I go cry myself a river over this
Mewmewmewtwo chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
This is so sad...Poor Skyla.
phionexxx chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
That was heart breaking ;_;
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
awesome job!
the cantarella of odile chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
This is awful in a beautiful sort of way. I know and hate that a lot of girls struggle with eating disorders, and it's wonderful that you've posted this.
GreenPokeGuy chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Oh, poor Skyla. :(

I guess I would be jealous, but I wouldn't change my lifestyle for it. :(

-Green
AshKetchumDarkSide chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
:( Poor Skyla. She is one of my favorite charcaters. Losing everything she wanted to Elesa. And Elesa got Hilbert made her sadder. I enjoy Ramionshipping but I feel bad for Skyla. Good story.