Reviews for The Betrayal of Haruhi Suzumiya
No Pal chapter 6 . 5/1/2017
very very dramatic, I really love this 3
Western-Otaku chapter 6 . 2/20/2017
Great story! It may be more angsty than what I usually read but I couldn't resist the fluff!
Agung Lim chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
tanzakin chapter 6 . 1/31/2014
Beautiful... I really loved the entire story in general! I can't think of one thing you should change! I'm gonna go read more of your stuff now.
Mike1924 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
This was a very well written story and certainly something I'd believe came straight out of the manga/anime itself! It would make for an interesting episode to say the least. This was a great short story and a really fun read. I enjoyed every minute of it. Safe to say this is getting Favorited. I felt it right to tell you what an excellent job you did on this! Overall, engaging story and great writing. 10/10 would read again. Happy Writing!
NepTep chapter 6 . 8/21/2013
This story is amazing! :D Honestly the characters are so in character, that at some points I forget hat this is only a fanfiction! ;3 Really, this is definatly one of my favorite HaruhixKyon fanfics. :)
Munch It Back chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, I really could imagine all of the scenes and stuff, great job!
Madcinder chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
Well done. Well ended. It was all a dream, Haruhi. Now it's time to wake up.
Madcinder chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
:D Explosions! I love it already! I was just thinking about an idea similar to this earlier today, and I gotta say you're giving me a good feel of the scenario without making it feel like I'd be copying you. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
Aww! Cute! Kawaii!
XxXCUPCAKESXxX chapter 6 . 5/30/2013
It was great! There was a couple of rare errors, but the characters were perfectly characterized like in the original series. The plot was developed well and I really enjoyed it! I hope you make more stories! Like this! :)
Taien chapter 6 . 2/26/2013
Pretty good :D
hammerheadcruiser chapter 6 . 2/14/2013
this is a really good story, well writen while staying true to the characters yet going in different directions with them.
Jch15Jch15 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
This is a interesting concept for a story... but in the end all Kyon has to do is tell Haruhi about her powers and get her to delete Itsuki's and Mikuru's organizations from existence. But on the topic of your writing, this is great, and realistic, it could be the actual Manga or Anime D
omh chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
One of the best endings ever! You're an amazing writer do us all a favour and keep writing for this series!
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