|Reviews for The True Champion|
| Anonymous chapter 13 . 2/15/2015
Why did you stop. I want the rest.
| IchiIchi chapter 13 . 9/23/2014
Cool story and all, but Ash seems pretty weak for apparently improving vastly o_o not criticizing or anything, but I would've thought he would be up to Champion level and not Gym Leader level...? o-o just curious if he's holding back...? or not. cant wait to read more c:
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/18/2014
WHOAH! I think this chapter was the best so far. I really liked the idea of Soul, a former Shadow Pokemon, but still a bit of that dark side in her. Really interesting.
Though I think its kinda overkill with all of Ash's special moves. It makes the whole tournament seem like a walk in the park. It would be AWESOME if other trainers could use those special moves too, and give Ash a little challenge. The only thing better than a battle which you control and dominate is a battle where your OPPONENT is dominating and in control, but you win anyway.
Other than that, AWESOME!
| We'reAllMad chapter 11 . 9/16/2014
Loving this so far - it's so unique!
| DarkLucario2 chapter 13 . 9/16/2014
Don't abandon the story, it's far too good!
| CracktheSkye chapter 13 . 8/11/2014
Woo-hoo! I get back from a month of summer training in Norfolk and this is what I find in my inbox? So. Much. Yes. And a lot of serious stuff in this chapter, too. Absol's prediction especially. I do like how easily you've managed to sneak Generation VI into the story without any ret-cons. The offhand reference to Yveltal is one of the best slip-ins yet.
And the [Insert Feline Pokemon of Choice Here] is out of the bag for Max. I'm actually kinda surprised it was him. I was expecting May or Dawn. Then again, they probably wouldn't keep the secret as well. The battle between Ash and Nyugen was, of course, fantastic. I can imagine why the Lucario fight would be difficult, though I'm surprised it was a draw. I would think Athena was far more skilled than a Lucario that doesn't have the ability to train against another Aura user. I did snicker a bit for the Pikachu v. Spiritomb fight.
Misty's battle against Fantina was, shall we say, tres magnifique. The reference to Adventures, with her having Suicune, was fantastic. "Whose breath is long winter," though? Someone's been playing Skyrim...
But in all seriousness, the entire description of Suicune's battle was almost poetic in its descriptions. Magnificent.
With Highest Regards,
| FacelessxAuthor chapter 13 . 8/5/2014
first of all, this is really great I love it.
second, are you going to address what's going on w the rest of Ash's pokemon. I find it a little hard to believe that he'd just up and essentially abandon them like that when he loves them all so much. if anything I expected him to have charizard or sceptile. this has kind of been bothering me so idk if you're not planning to address it in the fic would you be willing to let me know?
anyway, I hope you update soon!
| warriorsfan101 chapter 13 . 8/5/2014
Very impressive, and well worth the wait. The battles were well put together, and you did a fantastic job. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| SwallowTheSun chapter 13 . 8/5/2014
This is an excellently well written story, one of the best on this site, I believe.
I loved the way you described the battles in this chapter, without using the actual names of the moves, and the lucario fight was just epic!
I also love the way you have portrayed each character, it is hard to have Ash retain some of his character after he has returned a total badass and many authors fail to immerse it smoothly into the story. You are not one such author.
Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
Ok, I know you said you're NOT going to give Ash a Legendary. But I have a gripe with thaI mean, he has saved so many of them least I would think they'd come to his aid at times! It's like the past actions are nit there! But I understand your view and such.
It would be cool at least to see them aide him during the battle with Rocket. That'd make more sense wouldn't it?
Keep on coming with the great story! Also will there be shipping added or no?
| HP-DG-SB-NR-RR-AG-TD-KB-HA-AJ chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
Well, I'm still going to cry foul that Misty of all people would get any kind of help from a legendary pokemon and Ash doesn't. That's just wrong on so many levels, its not even funny. There's also the fact that I absolutely despise Misty as a character and constantly wish for her to suffer a repeating agonizing death. That about sums up the amount of respect I have for her. The fact that Ash goes and saves the world on a consistent basis and saves the lives of most of the Legendary pokemon, including Arceus, and gets nothing for it? I can't decide whether or not I hate this chapter. On top of that, I had actually forgotten that this story even existed. I'm going to go ahead and sit on the sidelines and wait for further chapters to see where this story is headed, before I decide to remove it from my lists. I'm hoping it'll get better.
| The Agent of Fire chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
I'm not much for Ash having a party of Legendaries, either. I mean, they're great and all, but what's the fun in watching (or reading about) someone destroying other teams with a party of Legendaries. They're Legendary for a reason; you know they're gonna win.
All the same... Giving Misty Suicune in this chapter doesn't seem very plausible. I mean, Brock talks about rumors of her joining the Elite Four in a while, but she has to use a Legendary to win the match instead of the Pokémon she's trained with for years? Probably not what you were trying to say, I admit, but that's kind of how it came off to me.
Anyway, other than that, I loved the chapter. Poor Ash, getting his cover blown before his big reveal. At least it was just Max, who's usually loyal enough to him to keep his mouth shut about it. Even if he did almost slip up in front of the girls. ;) And a Paul vs. Max battle? This should be good. I wonder how long it'll take Paul to figure out who Red is. He's usually pretty good about seeing through things like that, after all.
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
I can't wait for Max and Paul's battle and the interview. I am so excited. I hope you can update as soon as possible.
| WalterDornez215 chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
Not that I want Ash to have a legendary but I dislike double standards, It's ok for Misty but not Ash? not cool.
| JordanMax chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
This was really good. I cant wait to see max and pauls battle (fingers crossed max wins). So now that max snuck up on brock and ash and he knows his identity, i wonder if hell blow his cover?