|Reviews for The True Champion|
| dragoncreators chapter 8 . 2/19/2014
:D squirtle! Jes WAY better than tmmt!
Great chapter, loves tails and it was very creative.
| dragoncreators chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Looking good! Ash has gwown up, and sa has Meowth! Poor Meoth, can't walk upright anymore, but got stronger. It suits him.
| tadkins chapter 12 . 2/18/2014
Awesome story. Managed to read this from start to finish today! Gotta say, you've done a great job! I like how your story is. It isn't a typical "Ash gets betrayed, comes back and crushes the competition" story. I like what you've done with it. Looking forward to seeing more. Hope you update soon.
| He-who-runs-into-walls chapter 6 . 2/18/2014
Google falls short with Grammar but individual words seem to be fine
| He-who-runs-into-walls chapter 2 . 2/18/2014
hello from your future, my present
| sortofbored chapter 12 . 2/14/2014
Intense. Keep it up.
| FunFX2012 chapter 12 . 2/12/2014
I'm not complaining but it would have been nice to see Paul in the top 8 list and interact with the group (also dawn, I'm an ikarishipper through and through) just saying but still great story so far. Keep up the good work :)
| Arngeirr chapter 12 . 2/11/2014
It seems things are really starting to heat up. I can't wait to see you do with Team Rocket.
| joshie98 chapter 12 . 2/8/2014
Its so good pls update
| NANA-Chan101 chapter 10 . 2/7/2014
Hey i want to read chapter 10 or 11 or is it nine i'm confuse but one of you chapters got repeated
if you could fix that it will be most wonderful
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
Um you do realize that you posted carpenter eleven as chapter ten to right?
| Cased In Darkness chapter 11 . 2/6/2014
Why are chapter 10 and 11 the exact same chapter?
| Drakrath chapter 6 . 2/6/2014
I was enjoying your story for a while but I can't continue because of nicknames. Ash does not name his pokemon if it were 1 I wouldnt mind but come on he doesnt name pikachu? His best and oldest friend but does others?
| The Agent of Fire chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
You know I was just thinking of this story the other day? It'd been the longest time, too. Isn't it funny when that happens? After months of not thinking of a story at all it suddenly pops into your head, so you go back and look at it again, and then a few days later there's an update notice.
Anyway, the fact that it's the longest chapter yet goes a long way in making up for the hiatus. I don't mind hiatuses (except when they're unexpected or take place in a really exciting part) but a long chapter makes it easier to kind of get your bearings in the story again, 'cause there's so many details to remind you. Not a whole lot of Ash in this, but we did get a fair amount of Riley. And Lance, too. And Max's battle was really well done.
If they're already talking about the Top 16, wasn't Ash planning on doing a "big reveal thing" at the Top 32? Or maybe he said Top 16 and I'm remembering something else. And Brock's discovery probably threw off his plans a bit, too. Still, I'll have to look for that part...
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
Oh man! They probably weren't major character but I just fell in love with Meganium-Nine and the guy that just got killed in the end.