|Reviews for The True Champion|
| sortofbored chapter 12 . 2/14/2014
Intense. Keep it up.
| FunFX2012 chapter 12 . 2/12/2014
I'm not complaining but it would have been nice to see Paul in the top 8 list and interact with the group (also dawn, I'm an ikarishipper through and through) just saying but still great story so far. Keep up the good work :)
| Arngeirr chapter 12 . 2/11/2014
It seems things are really starting to heat up. I can't wait to see you do with Team Rocket.
| joshie98 chapter 12 . 2/8/2014
Its so good pls update
| NANA-Chan101 chapter 10 . 2/7/2014
Hey i want to read chapter 10 or 11 or is it nine i'm confuse but one of you chapters got repeated
if you could fix that it will be most wonderful
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
Um you do realize that you posted carpenter eleven as chapter ten to right?
| Cased In Darkness chapter 11 . 2/6/2014
Why are chapter 10 and 11 the exact same chapter?
| Drakrath chapter 6 . 2/6/2014
I was enjoying your story for a while but I can't continue because of nicknames. Ash does not name his pokemon if it were 1 I wouldnt mind but come on he doesnt name pikachu? His best and oldest friend but does others?
| The Agent of Fire chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
You know I was just thinking of this story the other day? It'd been the longest time, too. Isn't it funny when that happens? After months of not thinking of a story at all it suddenly pops into your head, so you go back and look at it again, and then a few days later there's an update notice.
Anyway, the fact that it's the longest chapter yet goes a long way in making up for the hiatus. I don't mind hiatuses (except when they're unexpected or take place in a really exciting part) but a long chapter makes it easier to kind of get your bearings in the story again, 'cause there's so many details to remind you. Not a whole lot of Ash in this, but we did get a fair amount of Riley. And Lance, too. And Max's battle was really well done.
If they're already talking about the Top 16, wasn't Ash planning on doing a "big reveal thing" at the Top 32? Or maybe he said Top 16 and I'm remembering something else. And Brock's discovery probably threw off his plans a bit, too. Still, I'll have to look for that part...
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
Oh man! They probably weren't major character but I just fell in love with Meganium-Nine and the guy that just got killed in the end.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
i personally would have preferred 'ludicrous speed'.. but i guess the situation was little too serious for Space Balls reference. those tend to have ability to ease (obliterate) any tension..
| furaiz chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
Nice update, can't add anything here for you to fix, since some have already mentioned minor errors.
But I can say I'm thrilled there's an update. Even if I have to wait another 6 months, I'm sure you'll get round to finishing it for the loyal fans
| ultimateCCC chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
First it's Unova not Isshu.
Second that attack is called Grassy Terrain not Grass Field.
| DiamondPhoenyx chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
Amazing fic! I read it all (Chap. 1-12) in one sitting! Keep up the astonishingly incredible work! Note: This name is similar to my account username. I'm just too lazy to login. XD
| LightRayPearlshipper chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
I actually kinda forgot what's been happening in this story cuz it's been so long since you last updated. Maybe, if you wait a really long time between chapters, do a recap of the last chapter or something similar.