Reviews for The True Champion
Ky111 chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
Great chapter, until the next one.
CracktheSkye chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
Yeeeeeeeesssssss! Glad to see you again, Wolfy. And yet another great chapter, even after so much time. That whole scene with James and Butch fighting in the Pokemart? That was like something straight out of a Quentin Tarantino movie; mood dissonance and all. All that was missing was for some incongruous music to be playing in the background. Maybe 'La Donna e Mobile?' Wait, no that's The Punisher.
Max and Erika having an awesome battle. And Cole getting really pissed off. Wow.
And Team Rocket has taken Iron Island, with only one survivor. That is some firepower, there. Winder what they want with the Mega Stones; they require the Key Rings, plus a bond between the Pokemon and Trainer...hmmmm. Well, at least Athena will probably get to Mega-Evolve. (BadassWarriorLucarioFTW).
Micro correction: Plasma is upping the ante.
Overall, another chapter of the wonderful quality we've come to anticipate from your writing. Welcome back!
With Highest Regards,
Guest chapter 3 . 2/5/2014
I see what you did there. Joey in Cherrygrove city, top percentage raticate :)
DraconianPhilosopher chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
been a long while Joe, I was thinking this was abandoned by this point. now all we need is for Indomitable Spirit and the Black Latios to get regularly updated and the original reasons I started reading pokemon fanfictions will be back up.

Good work, and I look forward to more.

Forever Reading,
Jpey chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
Great skills at writing. On the other hand, the idea for this fanfic has been purely overdone. If you can fix up the black and white portrayal, the realism, and the lack of creativity, this you could go straight to the top.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
One hell of an interesting chapter to read!
Luna Star Phantom chapter 11 . 12/26/2013
please more more i want know when the ending and when will they find out?
PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
Why the heck do the older girls keep calling Max "Maxy"? Maxy is a girl's name.
LynnRose chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
Hi, so I've been reading this fic since April, and I love love love it! I'm only reviewing now because I just got my own fan fiction account. I love that Ash is a super strong trainer and an aura user And that he has a secret identity without his friends having to betray him. Love the poke shipping, the plot is awesome. This is the only fic I've kept coming back to, and I've seen a lot of fics. When are you going to update? Please update soon!
Okutai chapter 11 . 11/8/2013
I thought you said it wouldn't take three months this time :(

I love the story and I can't wait to see what you do with the X and Y stuff.
fdenwjkfcnwqr chapter 11 . 11/2/2013
This is amazing dude. I made an account just to read this. Keep updating, because this could become one of the greatest fanfics EVER. I have been reading since the very beginning, don't stop now! We all have faith in you!
Flamingcheesepie chapter 9 . 10/12/2013
Aren't Liza and Tate both female?
sortofbored chapter 11 . 10/2/2013
So freaking awesome. I'm super excited for more. Keep up the great work.
kliong chapter 11 . 10/1/2013
Love your story, but the pace is quite slow. I'm skipping boring parts at this point.
paperaeroplanesfly chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
This story was absolutely incredible. Yeah go Red! When I read about how Brock knew he was Ash I was like finally! Ugh. These people are so dense. I mean a Pikachu on his shoulder and an Aura User. And it's kinda weird seeing Cynthia all sassy. And Team Rocket–meh. Overall this story was an awesome mash up of comedy action adventure drama friendship with a dash of romance! Eh, Misty and Ash! Wink wink. It's perfect! Update!
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