Reviews for A Kiss
natashasurgirl chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Lol! The ending made me giggle.

I'm really enjoying indulging in your one shots. I'm looking forward to reading your others.

I do think I should mention the word slit doesn't sound right when you refer to the kissing. Slit means to make a incision or slice open, which gives a gross image to the kiss. Other than that, I don't have anything to critique.

I'll be reading more!
AliceXxX chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Hahaha that last sentence!
Crystal Saturn chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I love this. It's just so sweet and cute with a hint of naughtiness... just how it should be! Well done. Keep up the good work _
shaydoe chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Sooo cute!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Oh cool I guess
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
This was sweet.