|Reviews for Heart of the Guardian|
| MissWikipedia chapter 31 . 2/18
AMAZING! I loved it!
| darkdranzer chapter 31 . 2/6
...i REALLY REALLY SERIOUSLY doubt snape would just wash his hands of all his slytherins and cheerfully say "thank god i dont have to deal with them" because really not all slytherins are evil pureblood maniacs even if thats what jkr portrays a few of them as. And i doubt his secret desire was to be gryffindor (ignoring lily)
besides that intersting fic :)
| darkdranzer chapter 10 . 2/6
it also doesnt make sense to make a slytherin head of another house. (sorry this is just really really seriously bothers me. ALOT) and i doubt snape would be so accepting and just say "i better act like a gryffindor"
| darkdranzer chapter 9 . 2/6
making snape head of gryffindor is so wrong. really. he's slytherin to the core not gryffindor. they're not the only ones who are brave or "good". this really bothers me
| Collibri chapter 21 . 1/15
Fascinating story. You've made me cry my eyes out and that's a feat ;-). I like the stories taking into consideration someone's feelings and internal debacles over the problems at hand.
| LilyIsAwesomerThanYou chapter 13 . 1/6
"PLEASE don't tell me that you are hiding Draco Malfoy in your wardrobe!"
HAHAHA love it! And I loved that last bit: "I want you to be safe."
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/13/2013
I want so badly to hug Severus... and Merlin poor Harry
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/13/2013
Dear Merlin... this is getting intense. WOW
| Misty chapter 23 . 11/14/2013
Your Latin is a little of. For spells it might not matter, but if you actually intent it to be proper Latin, it's not right - gramatically.
"eligere" is just an infinitive and would thus mean "to choose", not "I choose", which would be "eligo". And "sumo" is not related to "sum - I am". "esse" (to be) and "sumere" (to choose, to take) are entirely different words.
But for a spell it doesn't really matter. For the story it doesn't really matter either - because it is still amazing ;-)
| RedBear5 chapter 31 . 10/26/2013
A great, if hard read; you had me in tears nearly every chapter. Brilliant characterization.
Please write additional stories. This shows true talent.
| Hazel Lance chapter 31 . 10/9/2013
I've read this fanfic before, on myhogwarts. I loved it then and I loved it even more when I read it again, and I do plan to read again. Do let me know if you plan to do a sequel, that would be the best thing right now. Thankyou for such a wonderful creation. :)
| TheLadyJaye chapter 31 . 9/22/2013
What a fantastic story!
| TheLadyJaye chapter 26 . 9/22/2013
Omg, the tears started streaming down my face before I even realized it...when they were talking and then Harry said that he loves Sev...
| Blue Blossoms chapter 31 . 9/8/2013
This story is really like a fantasy. The thought process and Harry saying Dad, grinning cheekily. I didn't wait till the end.
| khrysavek1 chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
like! thanks. :-) it's rather hard to find a good story that's as full of emotion as yours without either falling into the trap of Screaming!Harry or over-doing the angst. You struck a nice balance. And, just so you know, Harry-Snape stories are, bar none, my favorite, so I've read quite a few of them. Your is among the very best.