Reviews for Culpa Bestiae
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 18 . 2/16
I still can't see why such a great story doesn't have so many view counts. Even if people didn't like the pairings, that's no reason to dislike the action and adventure. Anyways, I'll be waiting for the pokemon update. And do you think you'll be working on any new Underland Chronicle stories? I'm just feeling kind of bored with all the cutter stories on the site now.
h chapter 18 . 2/16
good son
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 17 . 2/11
This was pretty damn good! But I honestly felt that when the old packmates came back, that scene was too rushed.
tJ chapter 16 . 1/31
You said once before that you'd appreciate good criticism to improve your story but you aren't listening to it! We wanted you to make things less formal but you didn't! This chapter was good, im talking about all your stories in general. Stop using "however." Make your writing entirely less formal, not only dialogue. You have good plots, but the formality kills everything. This is casual writing, not an essay. You'd be such a good writer without the formality.
Yo tengo el clas chapter 16 . 1/15
e de espanol.

Capítulo increíble, hermano!
woah chapter 16 . 12/12/2013
That WAS good.
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 16 . 12/12/2013
I think that "And so, the two animals..." in the last line of the chapter should have been "And thus, the two animals..."

Anyways, I checked your profile after this was updated, and I didn't see an update, which is why I didn't review sooner.
MonkeyPaw12 chapter 15 . 12/2/2013
OMG! It's fabulous! Keep up the GREAT work! I love everything about this!
WOW chapter 15 . 11/11/2013
This is way better than your pokemon story.
okahy chapter 3 . 10/30/2013
You used "asked" and "said" too much.
okahy chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
The end of this chapter definitely could have been better.
LadyKitsuneHavoc chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
I don't know what you're talking about. You're a good writer. Of course, your story could use work, but no one is perfect. I don't pretend to be perfect either. I like your story a lot. It's very interesting. I love the story line. And it has inspired me.
Of course, there's very little similarities that will be between my story and yours, but your story finally inspired me to create a Wolf's Rain story, which I had been thinking of for a long time. So thanks.
Sorry I don't have time to read more of your story. I really like it. I followed and favorited it, which I almost never do. So anyway, please continue the story. And if anyone tells you it's not good then don't listen. It's very good. It could use some work, but doesn't everyone's? Anyway, I'm a big fan. And I hope I didn't sound rude at all in this post. o.o
Lolz. So feel free to keep a look out for my story and give me sugestions, and I'll do the same. Thanks
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 15 . 10/17/2013
Hm. I actually would prefer this to be updated rather than your pokemon story.
RadicalEdward6 chapter 14 . 9/3/2013
This was a great chapter! You definitely have the right mind to write an epic journey and I love the fact that you can combine action and a bit of romance into one story so easily. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 12 . 9/1/2013
I don't really like writing romance but I like reading it. But I like reading and writing fighting scenes.
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