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markab chapter 16 . 2/19/2013
I hope Sam is ok. He's woken up? I have to mirror everybody else here, MASON NEEDS TO BE CAUGHT...Great writing, and can't wait to see what happens next. A gripping yarn, this. xx
Chicky Babes chapter 16 . 2/19/2013
If Mason is getting impatient he's likely to make a mistake Hope they catch him throw him in prison and then throw away the key
Hope the tannoy message was because Sam has woken up and nothing more serious
Loving this so more soon
DragonKeeper4 chapter 16 . 2/19/2013
oh gawd cliff hangers everwhere you love to keep us hanging dont you love it thanks heaps
Shawnyola chapter 16 . 2/18/2013
It's sad to hear that there's been no change with Sam yet but it seems everyone's doing all they can and I liked to think that Aaron and Jackson, sitting by his bedside telling him stories, helped but... what's the emergency? I hope it's good news and not bad!

Great news that there's been a breakthrough with Mason's phone and they've uncovered Brandt as the lowlife who's been helping him on the inside. Hopefully Adam will be able to get Mason's whereabouts from him.

I feel the net's closing in on Mason but it looks like he's going to do another horrible thing before he's caught! He's going after Aaron? But he's not in Emmerdale. So will Mason do something to Hazel or Charlie who are? I have visions of Hazel smacking him round the back of the head with a rolling pin or something!

Great update and nicely written as always, Asa xx.
markab chapter 15 . 2/1/2013
Ohhhh, PLEASE let Mason get his just deserts! Brilliant as
Shawnyola chapter 15 . 1/28/2013
Oh I hope finding the phone will give Adam and Aaron a clue as to Mason's whereabouts. He can't get away with what he's done and him feeling proud that he most likely had killed Sam showed just how twisted and sick he is. I really want him to get his comeuppance!

Charlie, reminiscing with Hazel and Paddy about when Sam was a baby was sweet and I'm glad Aaron came round and was ok. He was lucky it wasn't a heart attack, though I doubt he'll take things any easier until Mason's found.

I'm glad Aaron was able to provide some comfort to Jackson who had understandably been so worried having both his son and his husband in hospital. Sam being in a coma doesn't sound good and let's hope this is no permanent damage done when he comes around.

I'm glad that the family are pulling together and are providing comfort for each other. Looking forward to what happens next! Nicely written, Asa xx.
markab chapter 14 . 1/14/2013
This is getting gripping now; I hope Sam will be okay. More soon please. xx
Nicster chapter 14 . 1/13/2013
Exciting couple of chapters. I'm so pleased Jackson went to Aaron in the previous chapter rather than rushing off to Mason altho I could've understood him wanting to get to his boy.
So pleased they've found him and I hope they can pump his stomach in time. Hope Aaron will b ok too, poor Jackson! Look forward to more.
Shawnyola chapter 14 . 1/12/2013
Oh dear... poor Aaron. Has he suffered a heart attack or just a bad anxiety attack? Either way, I hope it's not too serious as he needs to get back out there with Adam to find that nutter Mason! I really hope he doesn't get away or cause anymore damage as he's done enough of that already.

I hope Sam will be ok too, though he sounds to be in a bad way after having that drugs cocktail shoved down his throat by Mason, it's worrying. Blimey... and poor Jackson, having that dilemma - who to go to, his husband or his son? I'm glad Paddy took over, sending him to see Sam while the rest of them went to Aaron.

Continuing with the great drama here, Asa, what an excellent read! Thanks for the update xx.
Chicky Babes chapter 14 . 1/12/2013
Surely it's not a heart attack please let it be anxiety that's caused this attack
Please, please let Sam be oaky too
Chicky Babes chapter 13 . 1/6/2013
Does Mason have another person on the inside helping him because there's no way that Flowers would be given access to a phone after what he's done
markab chapter 13 . 1/5/2013
Ohhh Asa, I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon. Brilliant! xxx
mcll123 chapter 13 . 1/5/2013
How have I not been reviewing this?!
Loved this chapter with Aaron and Adam seemingly making a breakthrough, only for Mason to find out. Is it that cop who is supposed to be guarding the house?.

I am pleased Jackson went to Aaron and I love the way you write the relationship between the two of them but I just hope it's not too late for Sam. Please updae again soon can't wait to fnd out is happening x
Shawnyola chapter 13 . 1/4/2013
Wow, an action packed chapter, Asa! I'm glad Jackson saw sense and instead of meeting Mason, changed his mind and went to the police station to see Aaron, though he had me worried for a while! So Jackson snuck out when the police guard was taking a pee? Sneaky! I'm glad he and Aaron had that moment of closeness before Aaron managed to persuade Jackson to return home with an escort.

Great news that Adam had a breakthrough with Flowers, though him wanting a deal? What a cheek! I bet Aaron would've throttled him if he'd got his hands on him! It's good they know where Sam is now but who's tipped Mason off about Jackson not showing up and Aaron racing to his son? And Mason giving Sam that drugs cocktail doesn't sound good at all - he won't die will he? I hope Aaron gets there in time and Mason doesn't escape!

"You're too late."? I'm on the edge of my seat now, Asa! Please don't keep us in suspense over what happens next for too long! Great drama xx.
markab chapter 12 . 12/23/2012
Thanks for the update, Asa. I really hope Mason gets his soon. I hope you have a great time in the lake district, i'm sure there will be a roaring fire to warm you up. Happy Christmas love Mark x
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