Reviews for The Caged Bird
just an anon reader chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
This was precious and amazing and adorable!
Sorentense chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Aaawww... This was so sweet, I'm glad you posted it!
young kagome chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
How sweet.
coffeewintermelon chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
3 I'm so touched by this story :)))
veeery nice story and i love how the lovebirds interact :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
this was good! :)
Pixychick84 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Wow... When I saw the T rating and read the discription I had not ecpected somthing as..Dark themed as this, yet it was gone classily anc beautifuly, and was both sad yet happy and haert warming at the end not to menting beautifuly written, you can't help but smile at the end. Good job thanks for the read!
Miranda Everlark chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
This is so adorable I just cant...
sjcrown3 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Brilliantly done!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
DAMN NOW I'M CRYING (TT) ...really loved this story it was amazing!
Kyuubi's Angel of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Really amazing! A beautifully written piece of work and I have never encountered something like this! It's so original and unique! I love this, it's wonderful and absolutley enrapturing to read!
xXxCherry-ChanxXx chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Oddly enough this story reminds me of Sakuran. I'm not saying it's exactly the same but there were certain parts of the story where I could really visualize it happening and that just made it feel a little but more real.
I love your work, you are truly talented.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
i hate one shots, especially ones done by people who can really write because i always wish there was more. no seriously, PLEASE WRITE MORE. you could call it the caged bird set free or something and write a short story about their life together...please!
Anemone chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I've always wished for this kind of scenario to happen (but in more of a ... multi-chaptered adventure-type scenario..) but whatever, we readers will take what we can get.
And you didn't disappoint.
I think leaving out the lemon leaves a more tasteful, old-fashioned feel to the story. Not that a lemon cannot be done tastefully but for this piece, I didn't feel anything was lacking.
Nicely done.
Rain of the Stars chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I love this story. As always, you are an amazing writer.
ArtemisKid chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
I loved the imagery and emotion in this story. There are, though, a few mistakes.
The first is "Then what would could have possibly attracted you to this part of town, Samurai-san?". I think that you either meant to only have 'would' or only have 'could', but with both of them, the sentence becomes confusing.
The second mistake occurs as "despite the fact he had paid a god amount of gold". I believe that instead of 'god' you meant 'good'. It could also be that you meant 'god' and I'm not used to this type of speech.

Overall, this was an awesome story, and I loved it! Please continue writing such well-done stories. :)

ArtemisKid
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