Reviews for the delta sun burns bright and violet
Etcetera-etc chapter 7 . 7/26
MAN, THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. I was so reluctant to leave the page to review the story (because I'm on mobile). I love it that much. (AAAAAAA) Man, I honestly don't know where to start before I sound like some overrated review for a new book. Their interactions were superb and perfect. It was a great story—then again, all of the stories I read from you so far are perfect. The next one I'll read will probably be just as great. :'D
KissUzumaki chapter 7 . 7/11
the plot is rly creative and well executed!
Fiona Pines chapter 7 . 4/17
OMG That was AMAZING! Keep up the good work! :)
MakeItHale chapter 7 . 9/4/2015
This was so perfect! The build and action all had me at the edge of my seat :) you wrote the lemon super well too! Everything about this was fabulous :) although I wish there was another encounter with Havar... That side plot was kinda forgotten. Maybe the crews reaction to them together? Idk but an epilogue would be awesome :D
levyhime chapter 7 . 7/17/2015
You always amaze me. Super amazing story. So friggin cute.
Heaven chapter 7 . 7/7/2015
Love this 3
Manga753 chapter 7 . 3/9/2015
Thank you for the wonderful story i realy enjoyed it.
Kauia chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
This has to be my favorite mermaid fic. I love Maka's curiosity. Especially the way she would curse but do it so adorable. It's so hilarious to watch Soul trying to makes sure Maka does not stip naked. Makes me wanna wish for more scenes in this fic! Do write more!
WolfGal56 chapter 7 . 2/3/2015
That was so damn cute and well written
ILoveSxS chapter 7 . 8/10/2014
that was awesome I freaking loved it
TheHallow chapter 7 . 7/8/2014
Ohemge! TT W TT SO FREAKING CUTE! GAH! I LOVED THIS! Is there a sequel!? :OOO
MissDoctorYasha chapter 7 . 6/17/2014
The weapon/mermaid idea was a first for me. Couldn't stop reading. Great story. Well written. Wish there was a sequel.. her learning about life on land, maybe Black Star finding Tsubaki somehow and Kidd finding Liz & Patti (threesome ooh). Any who, thanks for a great read.
MusicalMelody001 chapter 7 . 6/4/2014
Oh, I love this story! My only grievances being that there's not more to read. I wanna know what happens next!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/2/2014
This fic is so wonderful thank you for making it! I really love mermaid AUs and yours is one of my faves
Ulcaasi chapter 7 . 3/27/2014
Awww I was hoping that they'd like have this weird twist and Soul became a merman or something and they live happily underwater slaying monsters and helping mermaids find true love n stuff. But this works too. :D
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