|Reviews for A Better Tomorrow|
| Starlight-blood-flower chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
| Art n' Music chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Very, very good. Something this great can't be done with one chapter. IT MUST CONTINUE! I must know. Who is Haley fighting? How did her family die?
What is happening?
Please continue this. I WANT TO KNOW!
| The Almighty Leprechaun chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
wow that was something. I could just feel the emotion you put into this. Good job
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
pretty good, needs mor chaps
| ForensAnthro chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Really depressing but really good!
| keotey1228 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I don't usually cry. But after my long, stressful week, I let the tears fall. Props to you helping me finally let them.
| Awsomaniatica chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Oh wow! Great job!