Reviews for Lumina
cbzoo chapter 28 . 2/16
I enjoyed it but you have written better
cbzoo chapter 14 . 2/14
gonna make sexing difficult
cbzoo chapter 8 . 2/14
you two are an awesome pair
cbzoo chapter 5 . 2/14
that is a nice visual
cbzoo chapter 4 . 2/14
lol
cbzoo chapter 2 . 2/14
certainly a different kind of vamp
cbzoo chapter 1 . 2/14
I never would expect to see a vamp story from you so I am already intrigued
Pendy chapter 2 . 2/4
Interesting chapter!
Pendy chapter 1 . 2/4
Great first chapter!
Chinosgirl chapter 28 . 5/5/2013
Enjoyed your story and writing style. Always been a fan of that stories that sound like a poem. And I also liked the originality. The little differences you had made it more likeable. Nice to read something that isn't the cookie cutter type vamp fic that everyone has wrote before.
LillianBroderick chapter 3 . 5/2/2013
Oh dear, these two are fabulous. Broodyward is intriguing I want to get to know him better, Bella certainly does :)
twiclare chapter 28 . 5/1/2013
Really enjoyed that, so different in so many ways. Thanks.
twiclare chapter 26 . 5/1/2013
It's strange how none of the rest of the family is quite as nice or straightforward as the original, you keep surprising me.
twiclare chapter 24 . 5/1/2013
Lovely chapter, they are growing so close, I hope they have the conversation about changing her soon. It will be a shame if they can't touch anymore when she wakes up. I love how Edward is so determined that it must be her choice, he won't force or coerce her.
twiclare chapter 23 . 5/1/2013
It's nice that Alice seems to have warmed to Bella, and now things are starting to warm up in general!
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