Reviews for The Last Shinobi
pyrorebel chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
ok i really like this story but you dont always complete your sentences before moving on and sometime its difficult to understand whats happening and to who but overall great story i loved reading it and cant wait for the next chapter
daniel 29 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
well trunks seems to have his mothers hair and should be bulma's son
Silber D. Wolf chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
great chapter, I hope that you update soon
FateBurn chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Good chapter as for Trunks it would make more sense if he was Vegetas.
Lightningblade49 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Now the question is will Shion and the baby actually be brought back with the dragonballs.
Zweig chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
About Trunks, you could use the Trunks from future as female and let him live in the past instead of going back the only thing which would prevent living there would be his mother Bulma still alive. Instead of simply Timetravel also a bit Dimensiontravel so she could still be Supersaiyan but you should also add her to the Harem.
Reishin Amara chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Poor Naruto...guess he wont see Shion afterall...or maybe he Never know. Giggity Giggity. ALL RIGHT!
Tenro100 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
lol awesome chapter
BeefNRice chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
It would be kinda weird if Vegeta's kid was named Trunks seeing as all of the Brief family was named after underwear :/
ddcj1990 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Nice I cant wait for the next chapter
Jimbobob5536 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
"DBZAbridged IS awesome, isn't it?
Hermes tonsils chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
I like the humor, and the would you kindly
luna sanguine chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
"Congrats, kit! You. Are. Screwed!" literally and figuratively
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
I second what Kurama said...He has the most outrageous luck...It's worse than a nuclear bomb going off right under your butt!
Hollow-Unlimited chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
XD good history its amusing a female Vegeta.
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