|Reviews for The Last Shinobi|
| Hollow-Unlimited chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
XD good history its amusing a female Vegeta.
| Dragonskyt chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Well, just look at the positive side; He will definitely get laid.
This is one of the best DZ X N crossovers I have read. I hope you keep writing.
| Psudocode Samurai chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Perhaps a cloning experiment? Like maybe Bulma can't have kids with him (different species, despite their appearance) so she resorts to science to help her have Naruto's child, and the key to that is her harem sisters, perhaps an egg from Vegeta, the regenerative cells from a female Namek (to bind it all together) then her and Nruto's DNA, this could also lead to Dr. gero's idea for Cell, that he stole her notes on Trunks _
Or just go with alternate timelines, if you want to be boring ;)
| Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
still vegeta's, though that is a very different dynamic
| Fyrflame chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
you can't name a child of Bulma anything but the names of undergarments, it is tradition.
| Ricky12440 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Great chapter. This story is really great so far. Reading it has gotten me back into Dragonball. Now, I can't wait to see when you post a new chapter of this fic.
As for the Trunks thing, if you're going to use the same set up as canon - with Bulma raising him after everyone's dead - it's still possible to have his real mother be Vegeta. Since in canon Vegeta died before Trunks even met him, you could just have her adopt him and it would end up the same. Also, since it's a harem, Naruto may just raise all of his children together and have them consider all of his wives to be their mothers, so it shouldn't matter either way.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for always putting out such great stuff that's always so fun to read.
| michelous chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Trunks could be vegeta and naruto's child in this fic it would make more sense
if he was vegeta's son he would have either red or blond hair
| Harry Uchiha Potter chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
awesome chapter. can't wait to read more and i agree i can't see trunks as anyone other than Vegeta's kid and i have a request please add 18 to Naruto's harem and please don't pair 18 and Krillin together. she kicks Vegeta's ass in super saiyan and he's the guy who get killed and brought back every other season.
p.s if you haven't already i would recommend watching dragon ball z abridged season 1 and 2 on YouTube it's awesome
| Darkca chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
so how many teamfourstar quotes you going to throw in next chapter
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Face Desk. He would obviously have to be Saiyan! Uugh, dude, its, how much DBZ have you seen?
| KakarotSSJ7 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
| rivereagles999 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
I think trunks should end up in this time line saying hes vegeta's and Bulma's son. then we tell him. Vegeta is a girl... (Because he could come from a timeline like the normal one). then he freaks out. then thinks of what i just said. or he could be one of the twins or he could be Chidori or the boy twin.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
i know that you probably have shitload of other projects going on but couldn't you have bothered to come up with something LITTLE more original than 'Team Shinobi'?oh well, it's just a minor inconvenience . the story itself is awesome :D
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
trunks would pretty much have to be vegeta's son. the real question is how would you deal with an immortal naruto in future trunks... future (crap that sounds dumb). pretty sure a virus wouldn't work on naruto, and i don't see 17 or 18 being able to take him out. you'll have to come up with something that eliminates/mitigates his involvement with that timeline if you want a future trunks coming to the past trying to save it.
| Aaron Leach chapter 4 . 9/17/2012