|Reviews for Out of the Ashes|
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Good. Beautiful. Great.
| Spatterson chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Oh my goodness! Maleficent sick, Aurora knowing magic and visiting her, Phillip turned down, and Aurora now evil?! This is so amazing. I'm impressed. Good work!
| AimForTheJugular chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Hi! Just wanted to say that I really love this story! I've probably read it like twelve times already. Are you gonna add more to it?
| Data Seeker chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I don’t like this story. But for the record, just because I don’t like something doesn’t make it bad. It has good points to it.
The quality is good in many areas; good narration, interaction, dialog, suspense, drama and emotion.
A few areas in the paragraphs and details need work. And the length chapter is a major improvement. Good job.
The characters have depth, complexity and scope, though they feel…slightly OOC due to the way you set up the AU.
The basic story has complexity and detail, though its grim, dark and tragic with Aurora joining the dark side and all.
This is what I think of the wholesome standards.
The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive, and you handled mature references well (THANK YOU).
No extreme violence or any other vile content. Also, thanks for not using SLASH.
I am dubious about one area. The concepts of good and evil are very ambiguous in your story, so its hard to tell what your promoting or condemning.
As I said, just because I don’t like something doesn’t mean its bad. God bless.
| whitetigerwolf chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Wonderful, though it makes me wonder what Aurora would be like if raised by Maleficent from the start.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
awwwww! its beautiful
| drippingwithsin chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Awww I loved this story...It was so sweet