Reviews for I Was Broken
Guest chapter 6 . 2/12
oops, saw that there is a sequel...dont know how i missed
that.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/12
may i ask what happened to the rest of the story?
reading all of the reviews, it looks like at one point,
this story continued to ch 15 and angie has been
returned 4 years later and as suspected, james and
victoria were behind her kidnapping. it would have been
great to have the full picture rather than this short
version with so many unanswered questions such as james and
victoria being more involved than what's read thus far...
also, i am sooooo disappointed at edward. he says, no one who hasnt
walked in his shoes could judge him...well, hell, i can. he left his wife who
was grieving just b/c she was depressed. i would completely understand
how depressed she is with the death of her daughter...edward seeked out
another woman and had sex instead of just supporting his wife. so what if
she didnt want to be held at the time. she needed to grieve in her own way
and once she finishes, she would come out of her fog and with his continued
support continue their marriage...but he didnot do that. instead, he fled to
another woman. idk how i would be able to forgive that. just b/c something
was difficult, he fled to another woman. another woman for sex and physical contact.
WTF? sorry, no matter how much she loved edward, not sure she should have
given in...i would want him to show his devotion more ie, divorce victoria, court
bella again for months on end and beg even more. just sickening to think
of the man you love having sex with another esp continuing to say how much he
still loves you...
jk chapter 4 . 9/3/2015
come on open your eyes you dumb fucks...eddie played right into their hands! well right into her vagina and now bellas doing the same crap with james its obvious this was their plan!
sue1zide chapter 7 . 1/2/2015
I know they were used in some scheme concocted by Victoria & James. It probably included Angela too but when she died they had to come up with another plan.
sue1zide chapter 4 . 1/1/2015
Damn. Is she doing this out of spite or is she still not in the right frame of mind?
sue1zide chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
This brings out a lot of different emotions in me.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 3/6/2014
ok here goes that was beautiful,heart wrenching sad and full of love and hurt but you did not finish it and said complete. I AM SORRY IF YOU GET MAD AT ME BUT I HAVE GOT TO SAY THIS YOU ARE NOT A GOOD WRITER YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER DONT CUT YOUR SELF SHORTBUT THIS STORY IS NOT FINISHED THEY NEED TO KNOW IF JAMES AND VICTORIA KNEW ABOUT HIS INHARENCE FROM HIS FATHER WE NEED TO KNOW IF THEY TOOK HIS DAUGHTER AND THEY DRUGED HER TO HURT HER HEART ALSO SET THEM UP TO GET SAID MONEY AND WE ALSO NEED THEM TO HAVE MORE BABIES HOPEFFULLY TWINS THIS TIME A BOY AND A GIRL AND TO REMARRY AND LIVE HAPPY EVER AFTER THIS TIME.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 3/6/2014
WONDER WHAT THAT WAS ABOUT AND WHY WOULD VCTORIA NEED TO TALK TO HER EXHUSBAND ABOUT A DIVORCE FROM EDWARD
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 3/6/2014
JUST GET RID OF THAT JERK BEFORE HE KILLS YOU YOU BELONG WITH EDWARD
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 3/6/2014
THEY KNEW DIDNT THEY THAT EDWARD WOULD INHERIT ALL THAT COMPANY THEY TOOK ANGIE AND WHEN SHE DIED THEY CHOSE THISOH MY GODIF SHE COULDNT GET EDWARD HE WOULD GET BELLA BUT WHY WHATS TO GAIN BY HIM MARRYING BELLA.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
I DONT KNOW WHAT THIS JAMES PLAN IS BUT IT IS NOT TRUE EDWARD ISNOT HAPPY WITH VICTORIA IS NOT IN LOVE WITH HER AND JAMES PROBLEY KNOWS THIS SO WHAT IS WITH HIM. BELLA BELONGS WITH EDWARD AND HE BELONGS WITH HER SO WHY ARENT YOU GETTING THEM BACK TOGETHER
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 2 . 3/6/2014
THAT IS NO SO GO TALK TO BELLA TELL HOW YOU FELL AND GET HER BACK AND HAVE A SON IT'S BETTER THAN BEFORE IF YOU REALLY LOVE HER GO GET HER BACK
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
WHY WOULD A MOTHER SAY THAT TO HER DAUGHTER. IT HAD BEEN TO GOOD TO LAST THAT SUCKS
Guest chapter 7 . 1/23/2014
A lovely story tbankyou
acullen905 chapter 7 . 12/8/2013
Hi, just read your story. Twice in fact to make sure I didn't miss anything. While it was a good story you left a lot of unanswered questions or holes in it. You finished it but doesn't leave your reader complete. Ex. of holes: what was on Victoria's old phone that Edward found?, What was with that whole cryptic thing Felix said to Vicky in front of Edward?, and lastly...why did James pretend to marry Bella and drug her to stay when clearly he didn't have feelings for her. Where they behind the kidnapping of Angie? If you ever have the urge to go back and add to this it would make an ok story, great! Lots of potential!
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