Reviews for Happily Ever After
Cale chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Great Story!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Wow! Great story! I love your writing, and how it matches the style of the book! :)
Haili73 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Just lovely! true to the characters, and absolutely adorable.

And I love that musical. I'm obsessed with it. You could definitely expand what happens in the play and the character's reactions to it. It seemed a bit focused on KendraxWill, not AdrianxLindy. I like both pairings, but this seems like it should be more about Adrian and Lindy. Maybe include their reactions to songs such as "Home" and "A Change in Me" (Lindy) and "How Long Must This Go On" and "If I Can't Love Her" for Adrian. That would be interesting.

I kind of feel like watching this play might be a bit hard for Adrian as well, to be reminded of his beastliness. Maybe you could explore that a bit as well.

Just some friendly suggestions. I love it the way it is, but you can definitely go further with this story. Wasn't expecting the proposal- loved it!
12fashiondesigner12 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
At Beauty and the Beast? How appropriate... ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
i love this book & this story was awesome & i'm glad you not only put adrain & lindy in this cute one shot
I don't post here anymore chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
LOVED IT! X3 So cute and sweet! Seems like the perfect "happily ever after."

Did you ever see the movie?