Reviews for Shattered
Project MJOLNIR chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
OMG this is a wonderful story. The way you described everything is so awesome. I really enjoyed the details and just how human a Gear really is. Keep up the great work! You're an awesome writer!
danny chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
hey im checking out your new story. First off you put to much in the description. you shouldn't of said he finds her let them read to find out. overall it was different but good
Dv4021 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This is so cruel, I feel so sorry for Dom! Great writing here, you say this is the first time you've written something like this? I'm amazed, you've certainly been very descriptive and let the emotion Dom feels in his dream come through to the reader. The ending with Maria standing there smiling at his efforts is really haunting. Very nice little piece of work.