I love this series so much. I started it while on long train journeys and have come back to read and re read it. Well written paced and love the world building. I’d love for a trip to Kalos next and would love Florges as a team addition to give an additional support pokemon (much needed in the recent big fights like with Durand) and it would complement the team well and would introduce terrain setting moves like misty and grassy which would augment the team as a whole. Can’t wait to read more and many thanks to the author and editor for all their work

This story is so so great and i am so intrigued on what xan happen next considering all that Ash has done wiyhout being a quarter through the current chapters
Thank you for writing this amazing story and i look forward to seeing what else you throw at ash to challenge the poor boy

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I wonder how many filled pokeballs are in that chamber of death waiting to be rescued by Ash only to wake up and find their trainer dead, unless some of the dead were domestic pokemon, there WAS a salamence in that cave.

great chapter like always

So Gary and Clair are going to have hate sex at some point right?

Huh. I just noticed that all but one of Ash's Pokemon are in some way Vertical. Most are Bipedal, Plume included in that, Lairon evolves into Aggron, a Bipedal Pokemon, and Spiritomb comes out of the Keystone at the top. Seeker is round so they're the only exception. As Ash is lacking a Normal type, perhaps an Ursaring, maybe even an Ursaluna via some space time happenstance. Bloodmoon would be cool, but again, Bipedal, plus we have no idea how that works.

Had to reinstall the app to get this chapter, but glad I did. The Rattata reveal had me literally go:
"Oh. Oh! OH." for like a minute. Awesome chapter!

Great chapter. Looking forward to more!

I ended up skipping this after speed reading past part of it for my reread, I just don't like this arc at all, I might regret it later though.

Honestly I’m really starting to feel sorry for Gary. Sure he’s a jerk but the worst that can be said about him is that he’s a bratty kid. Clair is a grown woman who half assed her job for years, let herself get dragged into a feud with a child and actively abuses her power to further that feud.

If either of them deserves condemnation and embarrassment it’s her.

You just know that Clair is going to troll Gary to the point where she actually marries Daisy or something lmao.

Great lighthearted chapter with an interesting ending. Especially loved the playful Mew and a thrown-off-guard Mewtwo.

A small bit of feedback, I would've expected Lance to check into Ash as well. I see how he (you) are trying to establish that this changes nothing, but I think it would be more fitting that Lance would also ask Ash how he is feeling about knowing Giovanni is his father, instead of only trying to reassure him.

I know your Lance is a quick on his feet action-oriented leader, and he knows Ash very well, but in this bit he's making quite some assumptions about how he thinks Ash is feeling, and I would argue another side of the character you build his also that he's empathic and thoughtful.

Anyway, looking forward to what comes next, as always!

Great chapter! The mey thing, I was wondering we're all that was going at first until this chapter which should make things interesting. The silver conference overall is going pretty well, Kinda wanted see some of the detailed fights but that better for later if you decide to do that. Finally that ending with Mewtwo their in the background as well gave me chills, bravo! Can't wait for the next chapter to see how this will go.

You're an excellent writer, if you one day publish a book of your own I'd like to give it a read