|Reviews for 333 Ways to get Kicked out of Serdin|
| joker07x chapter 4 . 1/14
DO YOU WANT TO DIE? EVEN YOU SHOULD'VE KNOWN THAT THE OFFICIAL PAIRING THAT KOG GAVE WAS RYAN X ARME NOT LASS X ARME.
inspired by the words of author
| Rinkushido chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Me: WAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD *Rolling on floor laughing* MY COLON! MY SIDES! MY LUNGS! HELP MEEE-*smirks* WAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *is calmed by the GC* Phew! Thanks guys! *smirks*
Elesis: Whats so funny, Rin?
Me: *shows no. 28 and 30 to the GC*
GC: *rolls on floor laughing* HAHAHAHAHAHA XD VEGIAS, A SHOT-*bursts into laughing*
Lass: *stifles laughter* lol Ronan, condoms! Really! XD
Ronan: Whered you even get them, Amy? *continues laughing*
Amy: *smirks* I have connections too you know!
All: Hahahahaha! XD *is laughing in random places in the mansion*
Sieghart: Guys wait!
All: *becomes silent*
Sieghart: *smirks* Boobs... XD
All *continues laughing until they all pass out*
Vegias: Hey guys Im back from the groce- *sees passed out GC and Rin* What in the name of the seven unholy depths of hell! O-O
And that, kiddies, is how the GC died of laughter. I have a new Idea for you, Ms Lunevis! Ill PM them to you. Thanks for the hilarious condom, I mean chapter. I swear I didnt say condom!
| RyotaEdge chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
...:O Amy's bag could have a gate way to another world! Ah I've got an idea for you
-Don't party with other Demon Swords (cough Grandark and Eclipse)
| Long Forgotten chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Excellent. The plan proceeds apace.
| A-Freeze12th chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Well, Amy's bag really is weird isn't it? Oh Ronan, don't faint now, Elesis might take advantage of you O-0. And the apple pies, hilarious . Well anyway my calendar says it is Holy Mana Day so have a silver coin of each elementals, Wisp, Shade, Dryad, Aura, Undine, Salamander, Gnome, Jinn. There all done. Now I have to feed my Rabite.
So you have it all until 75? great now few more and the 333 is done yay!
| XxcrystalzxX chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Funny . love this fic.
Heres a couple of suggestions ( you can change the words, the notes are just for added fun)
1. Don't show ryan how paper is made ( they cut down trees, break it into tiny pieces and turn it into some sort of porridge out of wood, why wouldn't he go crazy?)
2. Don't try to wake up the knight master at midnight ( she's a sleep walker and might kill you)
3. Don't pull a prank on the knight master
Hope next chapter's gonna be good :D
| XxcrystalzxX chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
So, chap 6 is made for reviewers who have given you some ideas?
So it's okay for us to give you minor suggestions trough reviews?
Cause i think i gave you one on the last 333 ways review i made.
Hope you update soon with another chapter :D
For both this and DT
| Nekuro Yamikawa chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
the last one surely so... funny. XD.
hmm, would you make an exclusive one for lime innocence cuteness. hmm, i think there is something can be developed from her.
| RyotaEdge chapter 5 . 8/25/2013
Grandark...messing up the world since forever, though I couldn't tell whether he was in sword form or demon form at some parts. Gran and Mary Jane got swag :D
| Rinkushido chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
Just came back from Camp and this is the first fanfiction I read.
*Points at Ms. Lunevis* That girl, give that girl a cookie! XD *Gives bag of cookies*
Anyway, I still cant belive one of my most favorite fanfictions rose back from the dead, and I bet Mr. RyotaEdge will absolutely LOVE this chapter, and I have another way to get kicked out of Serdin: Eat Lass' cherry pie (it was kinda simple)
Keep up the great work! :)
| Hystonic chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
XD Oh my, that was hilarious! I can't wait until there are really 333 ways to get kicked out of Serdin.
| XxcrystalzxX chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
Yippee, another chapter ()
If you need suggestions I can help a bit, I always have plenty of good humor stuff to suggest. ( ps : I'm trying to get crimson to make a new gc fic called prankster chase since she's gonna put the other two on hiatus, lost her plot bunnies, don't spoil the fic please : D)
I though gran was going to date eclipse :
Guess I was wrong
And how can zero never be born? He was created by oz during the wars. Only way for him to not be born is when something bad happens to oz or duel
And I doubt mari believed his stupid warning, she's too smart to think he's serious
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
Grandark, you sly dog, you! Blowing up the world, getting everyone to kill each other and almost getting the Grand Chase girls to make out? Mon dieux!
'"..." Amy was silent for the longest time.' PFFFT SHE WAS TOTALLY CONSIDERING IT.
*Is already in hiding under a table surrounded by Space Orks and Cultists of Vegetabl- I mean, Khorne, so what's the point of not commenting?*
Lire is a cheater, Lire is a cheater!
| A-Freeze12th chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
I like it, here's a Wisp Gold Coin for you, and a Silver and a gold.\
| lovesuffers chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
ahahaha! my stomach hurts from laughing!
Oh, miss Lunevis, you are a MASTER of writing fan fiction
good luck on updating! :D