Reviews for Out on Loan
Daydreams-About-Fallen-Stars chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
Ahh, I do love you so much hun, but your the reason all ill be able to think about tonight is them... doing sexual things... So thanks for the lovely image lol! Xx
Natalie chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Love it!
"Dont call me Ma'am! Im not the bloody Queen" OMG! You're not a Prime Suspect fan are you?! S&B and Prime Suspect are my 2 favourite Cop shows! Id love to see you write a Jane Tennison Story or even a cross over with Scott and Bailey- your writing is great!
Didget chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
lol wanna read more :)

Didget.
MegannLoouise chapter 5 . 9/19/2012
First of all, sorry it's a bit late, my laptop didn't show it!:(
'tits up' haha, soo Julie!;D
"Let's knock off early and go get pissed" and that is so Rachel too!
Aw, it's so cute that Gill threatens Andy to protect Julie, i was aww'ing so much at that!
This is fabby-tastic, i love it slap! xoxo
GigglingGirl chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
Firstly, I actually love this line "Well I wouldn't put it quite like that", it's hilarious. I mean, seriously, it's too funny! Oh my gosh I don't know if you have seen 'Salad Fingers' it's show on youtube, but I get seriously freaked out by it...it's the voice. But this, "Gill will cut off his dick with a rusty hacksaw", really reminded me of it so it's very effective. Hehe! I love that Rachel's solution to everything is to just "get pissed". Let's hope it's not on an empty stomach, for her and Janet's sake! I really liked and I thought it was a great ending. Well done (I would say kid, but slap seems more appropriate, so..) slap! Xxx
Sazzy.x.x chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
Eee fabulous ending! Such good dialogue in this chapter too; I loved the line " Even Kev's worried. You haven't told him off all morning"...and Rachel knowing 3 Julies made me chuckle too! Feel slightly sorry for Janet there though! Brilliant story, slap :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
S.e.r.g.e.a.n.t
Sazzy.x.x chapter 4 . 9/9/2012
Aww, I'm not sure I'm impressed with Gill in this, but I guess her reaction is kind of understandable! The Julie/Andy hug type thing at the beginning was really cute too, love it :') xx
MegannLoouise chapter 4 . 9/9/2012
Aw, Gill getting all mad is so cute!3 and i think i ship Julie/Andy loads now, hehe! Can't wait for the next chapter, slap!xoxo
MegannLoouise chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Andy, I hate you for being mean about Rachel!;( 'screw everything up' haha, was that supposed to be a pun or was it by accident?
"Andy. Don't call me Ma'am. I'm not the bloody Queen." haha, typical Julie! Loved this chapter, can't wait for more!3 xoxo
CaleighWho chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Screw everything up... thats punny, get it? Because they are "screwing everything up" and they are "screwing" get it?

I'll shut up now...

I liked that chapter very much! It was amazing, can't wait for the next :)

Very good!
Sazzy.x.x chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
"Andy. Don't call me Ma'am. I'm not the bloody Queen." BEST line ever! :D
Pahaha Andy's honesty in the last scene was ... refreshing! made me laugh out loud :)
'Hoping they weren't about to screw everything up' - hmm literally by the sounds of things (Sorry, couldn't resist!) This is FAB xx
Sazzy.x.x chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
Aww Janet bossing Rachel around...and 'Godzilla' joining in with the conversation at the end, loved the last scene :)
MegannLoouise chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
This is great Jill, i don't know why you're apologising! Aw, Kevin's thing about Julie, love it! And Gill and Julie's stuff on the phone is fabby! Can't wait for the next chapter!xoxo
Sazzy.x.x chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Yay, brilliant start :) Typical Rachel with the half smile! Loved the way you wrote the tension in this scene, looking forward to seeing how you develop it xx
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