|Reviews for Out on Loan|
| Daydreams-About-Fallen-Stars chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
Ahh, I do love you so much hun, but your the reason all ill be able to think about tonight is them... doing sexual things... So thanks for the lovely image lol! Xx
| Natalie chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
"Dont call me Ma'am! Im not the bloody Queen" OMG! You're not a Prime Suspect fan are you?! S&B and Prime Suspect are my 2 favourite Cop shows! Id love to see you write a Jane Tennison Story or even a cross over with Scott and Bailey- your writing is great!
| Didget chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
lol wanna read more :)
| MegannLoouise chapter 5 . 9/19/2012
First of all, sorry it's a bit late, my laptop didn't show it!:(
'tits up' haha, soo Julie!;D
"Let's knock off early and go get pissed" and that is so Rachel too!
Aw, it's so cute that Gill threatens Andy to protect Julie, i was aww'ing so much at that!
This is fabby-tastic, i love it slap! xoxo
| GigglingGirl chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
Firstly, I actually love this line "Well I wouldn't put it quite like that", it's hilarious. I mean, seriously, it's too funny! Oh my gosh I don't know if you have seen 'Salad Fingers' it's show on youtube, but I get seriously freaked out by it...it's the voice. But this, "Gill will cut off his dick with a rusty hacksaw", really reminded me of it so it's very effective. Hehe! I love that Rachel's solution to everything is to just "get pissed". Let's hope it's not on an empty stomach, for her and Janet's sake! I really liked and I thought it was a great ending. Well done (I would say kid, but slap seems more appropriate, so..) slap! Xxx
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
Eee fabulous ending! Such good dialogue in this chapter too; I loved the line " Even Kev's worried. You haven't told him off all morning"...and Rachel knowing 3 Julies made me chuckle too! Feel slightly sorry for Janet there though! Brilliant story, slap :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 4 . 9/9/2012
Aww, I'm not sure I'm impressed with Gill in this, but I guess her reaction is kind of understandable! The Julie/Andy hug type thing at the beginning was really cute too, love it :') xx
| MegannLoouise chapter 4 . 9/9/2012
Aw, Gill getting all mad is so cute!3 and i think i ship Julie/Andy loads now, hehe! Can't wait for the next chapter, slap!xoxo
| MegannLoouise chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Andy, I hate you for being mean about Rachel!;( 'screw everything up' haha, was that supposed to be a pun or was it by accident?
"Andy. Don't call me Ma'am. I'm not the bloody Queen." haha, typical Julie! Loved this chapter, can't wait for more!3 xoxo
| CaleighWho chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Screw everything up... thats punny, get it? Because they are "screwing everything up" and they are "screwing" get it?
I'll shut up now...
I liked that chapter very much! It was amazing, can't wait for the next :)
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
"Andy. Don't call me Ma'am. I'm not the bloody Queen." BEST line ever! :D
Pahaha Andy's honesty in the last scene was ... refreshing! made me laugh out loud :)
'Hoping they weren't about to screw everything up' - hmm literally by the sounds of things (Sorry, couldn't resist!) This is FAB xx
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
Aww Janet bossing Rachel around...and 'Godzilla' joining in with the conversation at the end, loved the last scene :)
| MegannLoouise chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
This is great Jill, i don't know why you're apologising! Aw, Kevin's thing about Julie, love it! And Gill and Julie's stuff on the phone is fabby! Can't wait for the next chapter!xoxo
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Yay, brilliant start :) Typical Rachel with the half smile! Loved the way you wrote the tension in this scene, looking forward to seeing how you develop it xx