|Reviews for An adventure in the 15th squad|
| Firewriter23 chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Hey great story! I read both of your other NYPD Blue ones and i thought they were great as well, i just haven't had time to review them yet! Anyways i love that all your stories have a big part with John Clark Jr. He is my favorite. Anyways again great story hope to see more from you soon!
| RachiU chapter 1 . 2/18/2003
It was good. Especially R/Jr moments! :)
Oh, and maybe you can break this story into several small paragraphs rather than one big chunk paragraph because it'd be much easier to read.
| PretendFan chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
If you use Microsoft Word, save the story as a web page instead of a word document and then try to upload it.
| koolkat21 chapter 1 . 7/29/2002
Just to let everyone know, I'm new with this, and this is the first story I've submitted to , and for some reason it jumbled up like that. So I originally had it in paragraphs but it messed up and I'm trying to fix it now. Thanks!
| ljae chapter 1 . 7/19/2002
there is this wonderful invention called the paragraph