Reviews for Surfacing
linda chapter 18 . 4/20/2017
OMG ! I Love your story so much it was great ! Even if I didn't already Love the McFadden's or not know who the actors were your story was still terrific you write excellent ! But since I do know them & this episode it made it that much more special I could see them in my mind & couldn't help but wish it had been an actual show ! Thanks for writing it & I hope that your family is all ok ! Long live the McFadden's !
mworth1019 chapter 18 . 12/4/2016
great story. wonderfully well done!
Shannon chapter 18 . 10/19/2016
So great you should write more!
merryw chapter 18 . 5/17/2016
So good. So incredibly good! Thank you for that AMAZING ride! You have single-handedly created a Daniel/Crane junkie!
jcrom chapter 8 . 9/3/2015
Boy you really did your homework with all the medical stuff. Impressive. I saw in your authors notes that you had some help. You could have made up a bunched of gibberish and I wouldn't have known any better. That's awesome that you took the time to research it and make it authentic. I loved these last few chapters but I decided to stop reading for the night. My old eyes are blurring now and also i wanted to end my reading on a high note. Daniel is home! Although, clearly there are challenges ahead...I can't wait to read about his progression. I can go to sleep happy now. Oh and I loved the line "I usually get a kiss first". Bahahaha!
jcrom chapter 5 . 8/16/2015
This poor kid. His poor brothers. Poor me. I am heartsick. I can't help but feel everything they feel. You're an artist. A WORD artist. I don't even know how else to describe it. I wouldn't be able to, even if I tried. Lol. I can't even write an eloquent "Thank you" card. Fantastic story and so well written!
jcrom chapter 2 . 8/14/2015
Oh man, this is good! This is the last completed story of yours left for me to read and Daniel is hurt in this one too! I can hardly take it! I am reading more. I have to. I won't be able to sleep!
MaryCS chapter 18 . 7/18/2015
LOVED this story! I read it awhile ago, but was glad to rediscover it! You did an amazing job with the characters - including everything from their respective faults and devotion. I really appreciate you sharing your talent.
rainefan chapter 18 . 6/30/2014
I thought of reviewing after every chapter, but got so engrossed in the story that just never happened. From beginning to end, this was not only wonderful but wonderfully written. The characters were all fully developed and true to my memories from 30 years ago. (Man, I feel old.) I've always remembered this episode with a regret that we never got a resolution to Daniel's situation - and here you have provided one. From his physical health to his mental state, I remember feeling that there were a lot of holes. And you have filled in all the gaps. Thank you so very much!
JQ chapter 18 . 5/28/2013
All's well that ends well! g Poor, poor Crane but of course Daniel wouldn't let him suffer through that alone. After all the times Crane's been there for him, I wouldn't have expected anything less of him!
JQ chapter 17 . 5/28/2013
I see I was completely wrong about Daniel being not pleased with the big payoff. LOL You do know how to surprise your readers, at least this one!
JQ chapter 16 . 5/28/2013
Well, you certainly wouldn't have seen a scene like *that* in the show! Though it really does make sense; I can understand your reasoning, etc. Aside from whatever Adam said to him, I don't think Daniel is going to react well to this money being used on his hospital bill so I see lots more turmoil in their future.
JQ chapter 15 . 5/27/2013
I have to say that Daniel is a lot more forgiving than I would be! First Steve, and now this Johnny character! Though I guess if he'd had him arrested it would only have caused more problems for him down the line somewhere, so maybe that was good thinking after all, LOL.
JQ chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
I absolutely did not see *that* coming - Daniel & Steve becoming friends! Way to turn things around, very interesting twist. Also was not expecting a Guthrie meltdown. Guess like the rest of his family I was just figuring he was taking everything in stride.
JQ chapter 13 . 5/25/2013
Nice scene with Adam telling Daniel, and Crane, about what happened after their parents died; poor Adam! But it seems to have served its purpose so that's a good thing. I would tend to agree with you on A's being 18 at the time of the tragedy; otherwise, I figure they'd have probably carted him off to foster care himself, especially back in those days. I can't see them letting him take on the responsibility of 6 siblings at 17 years, and it would be a strain to do it even at 18.
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