|Reviews for Fine Line|
| AngelesPG chapter 1 . 3/1/2017
Me encanto la actitud de Yami no dejarse someter y al mismo tiempo someterse encima enseñarle una lección a Seto eso es lo que el necesita gracias seguire leyendo tus historias son divertidas
| DisneyGirl10 chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Holy chiz! This was awesome!
I swear to God, your stories on these two are so incredible!
I will read the Entangled series just cause it's so interesting. An interesting concept. Part 11, IDK really but I know I will cry throughout the whole thing. But I will try to prevail.
This rocks! Way to go! :)
| Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
I love them being so damaged. XD Oh, Seto...
| Nightfire713 chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
Hell yes! Finally! Someone who can write hot smut! Thank You!
| lol chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
Mmmmmmm nose bleed
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Best fanfiction ever read! OwO
| lvb100801 chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
I love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
I loved this so much!
| nightoflight chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
So I totally read this fic a years ago when I just started to kindle my interest in Prideshipping, and guess what? I STILL love it. God, you're a great author.
| ChibiLittleMe chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
*extreme nose bleed* Where has this been all my life ?! I love this ! I love the way you portrayed Kaiba & Yami's relationship your writing is amazing ! My nose won't stop bleeding this is one of the best fics I've ever read
| polar.amity chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Fuck you and your fucking well written, insightful, funny, sexy story-that made me forget myself in public and accidently moan. Most embarrassing moment in my life. That aside, I loved this story. I find it to be very insightful, not just in terms of their hate fucking-which is way more believable than all the "Seto's really a hearts and flowers guy beneath it all" crap writers push on here-but in the correlation of Seto's need to win trumping his need to play, very insightful! I also loved the quips and jokes, that's just an extra pay-off bonus that I rarely get when I'm skimming through porn, you did it smart too, not forced just a natural (believable) flow that works with those two well. And of course sexy as the day is long, I've never been a big fan of Yami being top, but him making Kiba "want it" made me want it and on a bus full of people, it just slipped right out, fucking HOT, kid!
I cant wait to check out your other works. Thanks for posting.
| tsukinowa chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Oh goodness my brain has just turned to mush...Kamiyashi you've done it again! The whole 'fuck me like you hate me' thing...perfection!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
That was good for a first chapter hope to be seeing more work for this couple. That would be L.N-KittieKat
| HikarixYamixYaoi chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Oh wow, I'm not even a Prideshipping fan, but I fell in love with this! XD That was so hot, you did an awesome job!
| Nessahh chapter 1 . 1/19/2013