Reviews for Hello
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Oh my word
So sad...
Well done that was very very good. Andvery sad!
artists chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
if there's anything you fail at its not having any flaws in your writing
i literally broke down by the second last paragraph
Daisy Dollop chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
It did make me sad. Your tragedy drabbles do a proper job of leading the reader up to that final moment and tugging on the heartstrings.
caribbeanblues chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
It did make me sad. But it's really well-written and beautiful so you're forgiven. :)
Kathleen Kelly chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Ugh, why? They were such a beautiful couple. They were so young. It's not fair!
This is so beautifully written.
mojojojo198 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
It made me very sad but in the 'good' way, if there is a 'good' way to have an emotional breakdown.
ColFan13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Beautiful!
lilyhevans chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
oh my god this was beautiful. i’m crying now. wow.
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
omg this was absolutely gorgeous. You made me tear ;_; LOVED IT.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Crying because this is so sad and beautiful. You're an amzing author.
Zeeah chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Bloody hell. Excuse my French.
That last paragraph right there.
Are you some sort of feels torturer? A professional one?
Because.
No.
JUST NO.
I WILL NOT AND I CANNOT.
"You know, if those hands of yours didn't grow from such beautifully bony wrists I don't think I'd love you half as much."
This. JUST NO.

I know I'm babbling like an overgrown parakeet but again, NO.

Hello, James was my favourite.

Brilliant.
thearcherballet chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
God why did I decide to read this Dx amazingly good and sad :'S
Fyrebolt chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Read this so long ago but had to leave a review. Absolutely amazing writing.
Marshmello23 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
So beautiful and definitely a tear-jerker. Unique way of writing it and you really pulled it off - what a special way to show us Lily's feelings for James through every phase in thier lives. I loved it!
TibbyOlivia chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This was such an interesting style. I really liked it. Although it was definitely sad and definitely beautiful.
Good job.
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