|Reviews for Fusion|
| Pdd chapter 11 . 9/2
In my opinion, Zack doesn't need to be included in Cloud and Sephiroth's relationship. He already has Aerith :/ Just leave him out of this... I'm continuing to hate Zack in this story honestly... Just stick to Zack/Aerith don't make them a threesome!
| Syl chapter 10 . 9/2
I don't really care if Zack just went to Seph just for sex, I'm still angry at hin. And I hate him here. He already has Aerith as his girlfriend! She's the one he should only fuck with what the hell? Zack should sod off. Seph is Cloud's!
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/2
I hate Zack in this story :/ He should just fuck off... He's ruining things
| Konner2015 chapter 17 . 8/27
Awww it’s alright. I was looking forward to reading this someday. It’s lovely.
| MelissaMoonlight chapter 17 . 6/23
Dear Knowing Shadows,
I suppose you will never read this, but just in case you do it somewhen: I really loved reading this story! I loved the characterizations very much! I can understand if some people dislike Cloud having such a low self esteem in regards to Sephiroth, but I already read "A long, hard road" by Twig in which Cloud was similarly described and this was a great read, too!
I want to thank you for all the work you put into "Fusion"!
It would be so, so great if you would someday continue this story! There are still readers out there loving Final Fantasy VII no matter how old this game is!
| Littwink chapter 3 . 6/11
Hi, I’ve decided to make a compilation of FFVII FFN fanfics that aren’t on AO3 to share with others, and I’d like to include this one. If you’d rather I not share this please tell me. If you’d like more information and or the link when I finally publish the list please inform me. Otherwise, thank you for making such a wonderful contribution to the FFVII fandom! I hope that sharing this with others will gain you more readers!
P.S. I know that you’ve mentioned that you’re not on FFN much anymore, but I just wanted to let you know.
| Underwater Dreaming chapter 17 . 1/9/2017
Every now and then... I leave a review on here somewhere!
I hope wherever you are, you're doing well! :D
| guest chapter 8 . 8/6/2016
Holy crap, your Cloud is a fricking drama queen. Zack isn't much better, but at least he has his age as an excuse. I mean isn't Cloud 30 in this fic? He's acting like a 14 year old girl with boy problems. I can understand him being angsty and all that after all the crap he has gone through in canon but this is getting ridiculous.
| damagectrl.07 chapter 17 . 10/26/2014
You haven't updated in a long time, but I still want to leave a review nonetheless.
I initially didn't want to read it because it's unfinished and whenever I get to the end of unfinished fics I get really sad, haha. But anyway, I enjoyed reading this immensely. If you ever pick this up again, I'll be glad to read whatever you have planned for this story.
So yeah, I just wanted to thank you for sharing this story! Great job.
| Cremage chapter 17 . 9/13/2014
Damend be you!
Just when the thing started to get interesting!
I totally understand that 'not-so-proud' feeling when reading your own material. I started a Zelda fic some 12 years ago, back to when I was still in high school. At the time I thought that it was awesome and all and all...I never finished it, and when I found it again in my bookshelf, I started reading it again.
The first thing I tought was :OMG how did I manage to find THAT good ?
And I still have the handwritten books, but still...I might never finish it. If I did I surely would need to start from scratch, if only to adapt it to my 'new' writing style.
Anyway. I usually don't read fics that doesn't contain any...hrhm, lemon. I usually drop out after a few chapters. But yours...I don't know...This story just kept me waiting for the next chapter. I really like the way you depicted your characters, the way Seph is trying to wriggle in the party with is blatant lack of social skill.
Whish I could read more, but here again I understand why you put this story on hiatus. I don't know if this comment will ever reach you, but in the case it does, I need to say thank you for the story!
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2014
Love this story! Thanks for writing it
| serpentgirl2.0 chapter 17 . 7/19/2014
this is my second time reading your fic. i very rarely reread anything, btw. so. draw whichever conclusions you want from that)) it will probably be right.
i will be honest, the beginning was a little... weak. overdone. cloud was a bit too pitiful for my taste, to put it bluntly. but dear god, the progress - i have difficulty finding proper words to adress my amazement. the quality of your writing started to rise from chapter to chapter, freaking soaring by the end. roughly the last third of the fic was so goddamn intense and well-written that i literally had to stop at the most gripping moments to calm down and remind myself that it is only fiction, goddamnit. i read your note about not liking your early writing, but i think thats because when you think about continuing, the first thing you do is start rereading from the beginning, which... ouch. yes. maybe ignore the first half and start straight from the middle? i know its frustrating, but, man, its fascinating to me, this evolution of a talented author recorded in art form, illuminated through the heros thought process.
p.s. and your sephiroth is such a curious (and fucking painful at times) balance of detachment and humanity that somehow, miraculously works, and, to me, feels really, thrillingly authentic.
p.s.2. this is, by far, the longest effing review i have ever written, and i have been lurking in different fandoms for about ten years. the fuck.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/5/2014
... It's really depressing.
i can't read this anymore *scream*
What's wrong with these people's relationship!
It's so f**k up. It makes my head hurt like hell. T-T
Sorry if I make u feel bad.
I HATE "ZACK"! Argh!
| InstantKarma83 chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
Okay, so this must be the twenty-fifth time i've reread this fic and i feel like i rediscover it every time. I sincerely and truly hope that one day soon you will gather the will to finish this fic. I know obligations get in the way, and sometimes even inspiration is lacking (as a writer myself) but good god, if you finish this you'd be doing this fandom an utterly great service. Also, more than anything, this is one of the few fics that truly deserves finishing because of the solid foundations you have set in this story within sixteen chapters. It's amazing really.
I could really go on about why i like this fic so much, but i'm sure you've heard them all, so i'll spare you. Just know that even after all of this time, people are still appreciating your efforts. Your words are still moving people well after the peak of the fandom has passed. I dearly hope this, along with the other reviews, motivates you in the near future. Hell, if you even need to talk about it, or even brainstorm over it, i'd willingly offer my assistance, as long as it produces further telling of this lovely story. Hope all is well. Cheers!
| Gryh chapter 17 . 10/6/2013
I finally found this story again after losing it for at least three or four years, and I was so happy! But then I saw the hiatus note. I read it through again anyway, 'cause it's still a great story. I'm sad to see that it might not be continued, but I've seen enough go this way that I can deal with it. Hope you someday come back to it.