|Reviews for The swordman of the fallout|
| trevor chapter 2 . 10/2/2012
man you seriously need to learn how to type. this could be a reallllly cool story but your grammer and typing is just so bad that it ruins it i cant even read it.
| FunFriendKid1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Clothing design: She wears a dress shirt, and skirt, under a long coat. Also, she carries a goggle arround her neck.
| FunFriendKid1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Nationality: Asian - Caucasian mix
Personality: Nicole is eccentric, childish, and friendly.
Appearence: Eyes have two different colors (red, and green). Has shoulder length alburn hair. Has a small frame, and has a bird mark, branded onto her.
Tag skills: Guns, Melee, stealth
Weapons: Katana, throwing knives, Unique Revolver (The Ambassador)
Base perks and Strength: Bloody mess, Agility, and Intelligence
Weakness: Fear/Hatred of insects
Backstory: Having Travelled the wastes her whole life, Nicole had lost everything when her only friend and companion was killed. Having been brutally raped and tortured by raiders, whom she killed brutally afterwards. Now she travels alone, searching for a purpose, or a companion.
| the pain kane chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
really like the story so far hope there is more soon!
| ELMO-fAN cLUB MeMbER chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Seems like a good idea, but I think you should probably get a beta reader or something, because I noticed alot of mistakes.
| That Freakin' Nerd chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Name: Marshall Damien
Hometown: Capital Wastes (Not the Lone Wanderer)
Appearance: Marshall has dirty blonde hair that stops at her waist. She has been told to have Pre-War model-like features... underneath all the scars that cover her body. Especially on specific scar on her back that reads 'Vulpes'.
Clothing: Metal Armor; wears various dresses she finds in the wastes when she in spending nights in towns
Personality: Marshall is usually a caring and friendly person. She'll go out of her way to do something for someone, as long as she doesn't find a knife in her back. She is very defiant towards those who try to control her. She is very sarcastic, sometimes dirty-minded, and isn't afraid to speak her mind. If she doesn't like you, you'll know it.
Past: Marshall lived in a small town in the Capital Wasteland known as Megaton ever since she was a little girl. She didn't remember much about her childhood or teen years, but she remembered enough to know that she has been a loner all her life. She used to help a chick named Moria Brown with things around her shop, learning a lot about science and repair. But when Moria talked up this plan about making a 'Wasteland Survival Guide', Marshall decided to leave Megaton. If a chick scrapping up brahmin crap could make a change, so could she. And that's what she did. She walked D.C., helping those in need and learning how to survive without the safety of Megaton. But when the Enclave came around and all this stuff about some 'Lone Wanderer' person appearing from a vault, Marshall wanted to get the hell out of dodge. She left D.C. and traveled from place to place until she found herself in the hands of Caesar's Legion. She was a slave for Vulpes Inculta for a while until she made an escape. She is wanted in the Legion, a big bounty is on her head for her to be brought in alive. Now, she lays low, hoping to find someplace where she is finally needed.
Weapons: Anti-Material Rifle; Double .44 Magnums; Ballistic Fist; Combat Knife
Skills: Guns, Unarmed, Medicine, Science, Repair, Speech, and Lockpick
Strengths: Intelligence, Endurance, Perception, and Charisma
Weaknesses: Explosives, Barter, Energy Weapons. She has trauma from her time with the Legion.
Anything missing or needs to be cleared-up/changed just let me know :)
Great story so far :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
the stimpack part was funny
| Werewolverine chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Nationality: American (Caucasian)
Where they come from: Wolf was born in the Washington Wastelands.
Past: Wolf has been traveling alone, but was compelled to come to New Vegas to help those in need.
Appearance: Blast back hair and survival beard, brown
Clothing: Courier duster Back Bear (NCR Courier duster), advanced riot gear as backup
Personality: Loner, helps others in need, get's things done.
Weapons: Riot shotgun, a unique brush gun called Medicine Stick
Skills: Medicine, science, repair, barter, gun, melee, sneak, unarmed, explosives, lockpick, survival
Strengths: Strength, Perception, Agility, Intelligence, Endurance, Charisma, really good at sneaking and using two handed guns,
Weaknesses: Luck, heavy armor, doesn't like onehanded weapons unless it's melee
Anything else you want to add: uses all types of bullets for his guns
| FrankTheTank chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Before I clicked on the first chapter I was expecting a lot of melee action and extreme detail. Instead, I got another one of those stories where it tells the tale of the game. I find those the most boring. You did put quite a lot of detail into the last half of the chapter though, so I wasn't completely dissapointed. Maybe the later chapters are better but this chapter was rather boring. I don't need to know all of the choices Nero makes and what his stats are. It's a waste of time. Perhaps the later chapters down the road bring the action I was expecting. (After all, Doc Mitchel gave this guy he talked to for 10 minutes his wife's favorite and dearest weapon. Let's hope he can use it.) Chapter Review: 6.5/10.
| Cold secrets chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I've never herd of anyone giving their Courier/ Lone wander/ Chosen one
a sword as their primary weapon
| RedStar7481 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Thought I might submit my OC for your consideration.
Name: Jaceon Casull
Where they come from: Jaceon has never said exactly were he was from, and when asked he usually just says "Southeast".
Appearance: Jaceon is nearly 6'3, short cut black hair, and green eyes. His right arm was blown off in battle, and he acquired a robotic arm made of Saturnite (A space age ceramic alloy that the Saturnite Fist in Old world Blues, and the Cosmic knife in Dead Money are made of.)
Clothing: Mainly wears a old black military MOLLIE vest over a dirty white shirt, OD green cargo pants and black boots, wears a Legion Aureus coin on a simple leather cord around his neck, and a desperado cowboy hat. He also has a pistol belt that holds his pistols and spare clips. He carries a lever-action shotgun on a case mounted on his back that peeks over his right shoulder for easy deployment.
Personality: He is very calm and practical. He doesn't get mad easily, and treats people with respect, even his foes. He does care for others deeply, and does what he can to make their lives easier.
Past: Jaceon was born in the Southern controlled territory of Arizona under Caesar's Legion. He learned to speak Latin and fight through the legionaries, and eventually joined the Legion at 17. He was betrayed by Caesar in a skirmish that killed his century shortly before the Battle of Hoover Dam in an attempt to distract the NCR that cost him his arm, and he deserted. He now works as a merc for Bad Company, a NCR squad similar to the French Foreign Legion that operates outside the Republic's morals and laws. Basically, Bad Company does all the missions deemed too dangerous or time consuming for NCR troopers. He refuses to tell how he got his Saturnite arm.
Weapons: Jaceon has a hunting rifle with extended mags and a scope, two black .45 auto pistols with "Vertuntur sanguinis causa." engraved in silver on both sides of the slides (It means "Spill blood for the cause."), his lever-action shotgun and a Bowie knife. He also uses his Saturnite arm for unarmed combat.
Skills: Guns, Melee, Unarmed, Survival, and Repair
Where would they be found for recruitment: Wandering the wastes alone.
Why they would be found there: Bad Company works in one or two man teams. But he likes to work alone.
Strengths: Strength, Intelligence, Perception, Luck.
Weaknesses: He doesn't like people walking behind him, being handed things, or crowded areas. And due to his rough and gruff attitude he has low Charisma.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2012