Reviews for Twisted
CatchFireAndBurnWithMe chapter 10 . 2/24/2013
This story doesn't work. There is no way two 16 year olds could open a medical clinic and NO WAY one of them would have a nursing license, the state boards REQUIRE you to be at LEAST 18. The first chapter was so horrible, so I skipped to the last one to see if there was any improvement and nope. The sisters have discovered a third long lost sister? The third sister had amnesia from a tornado years ago? Think there'd be a little more reaction from them all rather than "oh hi, I think I'm your long lost sister." "Oh good, you can storm chase with us." Talk about annoying Mary Sues, you've produced them in triplicate.
Dimples73 chapter 7 . 10/4/2012
Good update !
Reba-Brockfan chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
I'm intrigued by Jo and Bill and it's so sweet how Brock and Reba miss each other. Good update. So funny.
CanadianWriter73 chapter 5 . 9/20/2012
good i like it
richieb12322 chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
very descriptive :)
CanadianWriter73 chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
good chap
Laila chapter 3 . 9/8/2012
I like how it's going so far. Please update soon!
Reba-Brockfan chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
I'm glad Lori Ann is in this story. Good update.
CanadianWriter73 chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
great! update soon
CanadianWriter73 chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
Good start! hope to read more soon
Reba-Brockfan chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
Reba should be protective of her daughters because they're so young. Nice start. Update soon.
Reba-Brockfan chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Sounds promising. Off to read more.