Reviews for When He Comes
shika93 chapter 1 . 2/3
Awesome.
cainapple chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
I really love this story! Congrats :D
angel897 chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
liked it
tabby793 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Aww it's happy yet sad. Absolutely fantastic! :)
CloBo chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I really love your character and their dynamics :) It would be wonderful if you could do a whole story there arent many Barney relationship stories of this level xx
Mocha chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Sorry about not logging in, but this was simply amazing. The entire story flowed so eloquently. By far if not the best Expendables story I've seen. You made my day
Moviemuncher chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Aww bless. Is there any more? Maybe a one shot spiraling off this one.
way2cool4uXX chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
This story was...I don't have words for it. I loved the way you described her situation and really portrayed how difficult this was for her. I think this is the first Barney/OC story out there, and you wrote it brilliantly. Please please PLEASE continue, or at least write more one-shots like this one!
LazyBum chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Sorry, too lazy to log in :P But I HAD to review this. It was AMAZING and I absolutely loved it! You REALLY should consider making this a full story. It would make me happy :D
Expndblfan chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I absolutely love your story. Thankyou for making a barney ross/oc one! It was amazingly written. Im just so sad it was a oneshot