Reviews for The Love of Olympians
Mortussia chapter 6 . 1/30
So far,I like it. The only thing I can say to help is that the dialog is a little stiff. Use more contractions. Mac and Belov were sounding a little like Data from Star Trek.
Guest chapter 21 . 1/16
So glad you updated this please keep going, love this story.
reigningseven chapter 19 . 1/10
i love the unknown underdog but i think i might like this story even more. i hope you cont ith it as well.
Kitkatluvuxx chapter 17 . 7/28/2014
Amazing. Please update soon. :)
Trins xxx chapter 2 . 7/18/2014
I thought it was Lauren's father who convinced Sasha Belov to train Lauren and Kaylie and Payson at Boulder?
Sarah chapter 17 . 7/13/2014
Love! Please make them a couple!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/11/2014
Yay! an update! please continue soon!
Nova1616 chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
I really like having a lot of short chapters rather than a few long ones! I like it so far(:
Nova1616 chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Im just starting to read this... I really wish that the show would have continued but I cant wait to see where you go with the story! (:
Mdaw99 chapter 15 . 1/15/2014
I think this story is good and you hit a lot of key points I do gymnastics nothing of this level or competive but I am a decent gymnast beside that in competion I would probably be a level 4 or 5 my strongest points are Bar and Floor so if you ever need any help with some moves I can help just email me at But otherwise this really is a good story so keep on writing
Guest chapter 15 . 1/12/2014
Amazing keep up the good work! Could you maybe have kaylie relapse or payson get an eating disorder? Many thanks keep writing!
carlea chapter 14 . 12/17/2013
can't wait to read more!
Sweet Darkling chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
Sorry to trouble you but there was a mistake in your chapter. It wasn't Alex that brought Sasha to the Rock, it was Steve Tanner. Just wanted to mention it.
carlea chapter 13 . 10/17/2013
i am really enjoying your story and can't wait to read more. the one thing i will say is maybe develop your chapters a little more since some of it seems to be rushed. i would have liked to see what happend when kaylie and colleen went to dinner. i think maybe an effective punishment for payson would have been to kick her out of the gym for a few days. i really like seeing becca come into her own. i can't wait to read more.
Anon chapter 12 . 9/2/2013
I really like this please update soon! Theres nothing like this out there. Are you going to add more Austin/kaylie? Overall, great job!
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