Reviews for The Other Sforza Girl
assassiannabelle chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
Love it so far
Kaywre3n chapter 26 . 5/22/2013
yah, is that seriously the end? Please I know your finished but give them a happier ending that please :D
paperflowers226 chapter 26 . 5/16/2013
what a cute ending!
Matteo sounds adorable and wow...ezio and chiara need to get together! if we're allowed to decide then I say CHEZIO FOREVER hehe

thanks for the great read! i had hours to kill and this was great. i wonder if you will write anymore?

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paperflowers226 chapter 25 . 5/16/2013
awwwww, poor Chezio.
its a bit of an abrupt ending i must say but it does feel like one. some questions are still at the back of my mind though. Hope theyre answered in the epilogue!

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paperflowers226 chapter 24 . 5/16/2013
omg i almost panicked when i thought Chiara died! needed to read it twice to realise it was just an illusion from the apple. almost done.

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paperflowers226 chapter 22 . 5/16/2013
*girly squeal*
yayyyyy! finally they said they love each other. its about time but i'm glad you went slow and didn't rush with it! Chezio! hehe XP

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paperflowers226 chapter 21 . 5/16/2013
i love how Chiara is so brave! i hate it how women are either whiny and damsels in distress or very cocky and full of attitude. chiara has displayed both in the book but in a good way!
can't believe i'm almost finished!

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paperflowers226 chapter 19 . 5/16/2013
So rodrigo was a zombie? it would have been nice to see more of a fight but he's like a zombie so its understandable, hehe

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paperflowers226 chapter 17 . 5/16/2013
either ezios' dad is still alive after all these years and is uber old or...i dunno.
i'm so happy chiara is back home with the assassins but Ezio's protectiveness will be interesting to see since we always see it with claudia.
paperflowers226 chapter 11 . 5/16/2013
im so tempted to finish the whole book before i review!
Why, machiavelli? why did you have to be such a d***? i can sort of see why he did it i think but ill carry on.

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paperflowers226 chapter 7 . 5/16/2013
well that was unexpected. i love ezio's smirks and teasing. it's so 'him'. XP

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paperflowers22 chapter 6 . 5/16/2013
poor chiara
you'd think ezio would understand how chiara feels with nobody left.
paperflowers22 chapter 5 . 5/16/2013
wrong review on the wrong chapter
ch4 review is for this ch! sorry!
paperflowers226 chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
never saw such a defensive side of Machiavelli before. i have to get used to how he actually has feelings for a noblewoman. i like it!

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paperflowers226 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
i like the poem you wrote which was actually a code between cesare and caterina. interesting to see what happens next!
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