Reviews for Harry Ne Potter
hpnut1 chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
I love the story and the direction you are going in it, keep it up!
J.A Jasper chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
Okay, since it is your first story I will try and be easy on you with the issues I have with your story.

First and foremost are the dates of the story, you have the Potters saying they need to separate the boys, to keep Harry away from Devin, yet you have Harry not showing up till he is 6, this makes no sense.

While I know you have Harry being a genius, you have pushed the envelope a little far, as it would take a normal genius much longer to learn all the skills you have given Harry, yet he had a year of school. Where did he learn the rest?

The next issue is the use of the internet, while the internet has been around since 1950 and was made public in the early 1980's it was not commonly used till early to mid 1990's. While I can see a Prince using it do his money you may want to tone the tech side back some, as it is a common issue in stories, that we try to put our tech into a earlier time.

The flow of the story seems ridgid and needs work but I like the idea, and this is coming from someone that is not a fan of twin Potters.
Starman800 chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
Very good story. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for harry, and Hermione. Please keep up the story..
Aaron Leach chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
Awesome chapter
Collin Oshea chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
Good chapter, keep up the good work.
mizzrazz72 chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
Harry should have went to Severus about his detention.
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
What will happen next
When will Harry end up with hermione
What the house of snakes do about the prejudice they are receiving the professors and the student body
little-bast chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
Great Chapter...Keep them coming!

McGonagall is obviously showing she is bias by keeping Harry and Hermione longer then her students who started the whole thing...

Harry should keep records and memories of the bias against him by teachers and students while he's a student at Hogwarts! ( for things like slander, assault and so on)

Looking forward to your next chapter...
Can't wait to see what Harry does next...
Hoping for an update soon...
Jordana Babe chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
I have read the last two postings and Im sorry for not sending a review I am having computer issues and usinf my Iphone dosent always work. Im still reading and enjoying the fic post more soon.
TsukiyoTenshi chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
Well, the mirror's done and over with for the time being...I wonder how everything else will go?

917brat chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
Oh I like this it is so brillint and intresting please keep it up.
shugokage chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
Great chapter and interesting scene with the Mirror!
Goldencoyote chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
AnAddictedReader chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
At this point Ollivander said "Onto the books, but before we head in to get your school books I think you might enjoy a trip to a store with more useful books and trinkets.

I think you meant Flitwick.
AnAddictedReader chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
Damn, you made Harry so godly already. When I was looking at the school subjects he was taking, I drooped since in high school, barely took half of those classes. Though I know it would pretty much improbable for people to be that smart.
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