|Reviews for Harry Ne Potter|
| ravious light chapter 11 . 7/28/2013
Really good plot. I really liked it. Keep posting
| sortofbored chapter 11 . 7/17/2013
I like it a lot.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/18/2013
what the fuck is having an another secret identity when its an open secret? why even bother with new identities when dumbledore figured it out and harry openly stated it. what a moron.
| raveman2 chapter 11 . 6/9/2013
Very intriguing story looking to more.
| The Whimsical Ermine chapter 11 . 5/23/2013
wonderful. I look forward to your next update.
| The Blue Full Moon chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
Hmm... " Swedish Up to Fluency"... Would be funny if he really learned Swedish ... please, give us a
Swedish lesson ;)
| Mari Wollsch chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
great story, when will you continua? xxxxx
| PaC chapter 11 . 3/30/2013
Such a super uber Harry, to the level of parody except it reads as if the fic takes itself seriously. A group of betas not for grammar and spell-checking but for suggesting changes to THEMES, IDEAS, structure, plotline modifications could bring this story into being much better a fic than it is.
Barely through the first year and ELEVEN years old, the powers and activities are already in high earth orbit, so where can the story go from here, sky being the limit is already breached? Perhaps vignettes maybe, jumping forward to scenes year to year into the future and then getting into post-graduated-Hogwarts-Harry chapters might work.
With a child doing in few years what Harry did, 10 college degrees while building a giant corporation?
Heck, how's Harry not graduate by Yule, or at least by the end of year one or year two tops. Unless he's going to get some professor minions to teach him masteries in all subjects, so then what, another year or two, tops.
If his memory is eidetic, he doesn't need to stay for the library, or copy all the books in the library or steal the entire library, just read ALL the books and bring up the memories later of reading all the books at high speed, to actually learn and study/understand what he read. At this pace, he's got no reason to hang around Hogwarts long other than collecting some minions.
Suggestion, if this story is not dropped, add to authors notes if in the future various persons have retribution visiting them, such as a future chapter where BAD things happen to the twerp trying to push Harry off the astronomy tower, an A/N reminding readers of this when "something" happens to the twerp, useful, especially for those reading stories like this months or year after reading earlier chapters.
Example: A/N "Recall Jason Abott in chap 10 tried to push Harry off astronomy tower and with Harry's non-status with being disowned and the new law passed assumed murdering Harry isn't a crime E.T.C.
AS over the top ridiculous this story is, much like eating completely adulterated junk food from time to time at a pace to stuff the face, this junkfood superharry story has a good fast pace would be my first complement. Secondly despite all the flaws, if one just ignores them, it's an entertaining quick read, and the price is cheap.
| EzuTheDarkLord chapter 11 . 3/17/2013
one of the best i have ever read hope you will continue it
| pleb94 chapter 6 . 3/4/2013
although you use death to easily and the equivalent of pounds to gallons make the prices shown impossible your story is well written if slightly bloody.
| Akuma-Heika chapter 11 . 2/12/2013
The unforgivable would normally result in Terrence's arrest, but since it only caused a permanent effect in large continuous doses it was allowed in duels.
The reasons the Unforgivables are Unforgivable is because of the intent behind it. You need truly malicious intent in order to use it. This logically it would have no legal usage in any form.
(Nephew of Bellatrix, Rodolphus and Rabastan)
Would make more since for him to be Bella's or Raba's son.
| Akuma-Heika chapter 8 . 2/12/2013
"Thank you Hedwig here's a treat."
| PixieLockette chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
3211111111 not 10. There are 3 Lestrage's, 2 Carrow's and 6 individuals.
I thought I would point this out. I am not trying to insult you or anything I just like working out tiny details and often I will mention mistakes to the Author so they know. (I help Beta one of my friends and it's good practice as she can be completely oblivious and gets ripped out for the tiniest mistakes by one of her stalkers.)
| sneaky lunitic spy chapter 11 . 2/6/2013
Please update soon, i love this
| Akuma-Heika chapter 7 . 2/5/2013
9 inch oak and unicorn hair wand
From what I got from HP lore Unicorn's are powerful magically. I would expect the wand to be so as well.