Reviews for A spoonful of sugar
grandiose6 chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
I'm loving this story! liked the 'like polishing firewood' in ch 3 and also Ursa's patience and listening with Toph here.
Gabubu chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
This is wonderful! More please!
KnowledgeandImagination chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
awww, that's so cute! XDXD. I love Ursa's firm nonchalance during toph's tantrum. haha, guess azula gave her a lot of experience
Somariel chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
This is a great chapter. I really love how Ursa gets through to Toph.
BoogieBoy chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
We've all felt the frustration of adults thinking you're stupid just because you're young.

Nanny rocks!
Daisy312 chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
I can't wait to see what you write next!
Daisy312 chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
I love the way that you personify Ursa. She seems like she would be a perfect mother-figure for Toph.
Daisy312 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Great beginning!
VampiressE12B chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
Yep I imagine azula was a tantrum thrower. I can't see zuko being one. I know my little sisters tantrums are intense (throwing chairs flipping tables kind of intense) but when I was little, I tried throwing a tantrum and just broke down laughing in the middle of it. Ursa sounds like an awesome nanny. Did tophs parents know her name? It sounds like toph only knew her as nanny number four, but I assume poppy would have asked her what her name was before hiring her.
Vaneria Potter chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
Well, after several years of suffering through Azula tantrums, Ursa would be something of a practiced hand.
titpuce86 chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
Yay! Go Ursa! It seems like a very interesting story and I'm most certainly looking forward to the next chapters.
SasaRea chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
That was hilarious! Toph was really in character and i can picture her adding salt to her nannies food in my head. I hope you update soon!
Azhwi chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Yay! Toph is getting some sensible training!

And... was that a Pride & Prejudice quote? 3
Astrid Goes For A Spin chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
Hahahahaahahahahahaahahahaha . This is beautiful! I love the way you write with third person present, MASTERFULLY. I'm very, very impressed. XD. It's also clever and ingenious. Ursa, being cast out of the Fire Nation, meets Toph? Remarkable! I also like the way you touched on how Toph really does (especially at the age of six) crave the attention of a parent - she got on well with Iroh, why not Ursa? XD
blinkenlights n spitzensparks chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Oh this is fantastic! I really love that in writing your stalking series, you're filling in so many blank spots, plot holes/questionable occurrences, and details of character backgrounds, with your own headcanon. I'm really looking forward to see how this plays out - the battle of two very sneaky and wily characters! XD
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