|Reviews for A spoonful of sugar|
| Viannaz chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I love this so far; it's such a fresh/ fantastic spin on Ursa's story! (Ahh and I can't wait to see how this plays out into the stalking verse! :O Assuming that the gaang goes on the search for zuko's mom later on, Toph would recognize Ursa and since Iroh's pretty much adopting her, they'd be such a sweet family :,D) Do keep writing this and everything else! It's all amazing :D
| Charmed-Ravencla chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I really liked it! So that's how/why Ursa married Ozai. I'm seeing a parallel to Mai here - I almost feel as though Mai and Toph should have a heart to heart at some point with the expectation of their mothers. I loved your take on it.
| Vaneria Potter chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I'm hearing a touch of Mrs Bennett there.
So, we have rebellious little!Toph vs wily Ursa, who has experience with strong-willed little girls.
I foresee fireworks. Of the "Australia Day Celebrations" magnitude.
| VampiressE12B chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I'm pretty amused by the mention of sugar in the title and then the focus on salt XD also, GUCKING URSA IS ALREADY SO EPIC. I see this is where zuko gets his awesome :)
| Darknesse Sidhe chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
I like how sneaky Toph and Ursa are. And Toph's poor, oblivious mother ...
| Charmed Ravenclaw chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
Toph's POV made me sad. I pity the nannies though. But I really enjoyed Ursa's wiliness.
| Charmed Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Ooh, this is a cool spinoff! I find it strange that Ursa dislikes Poppy for being so weak and docile - I think it's because I personally didn't view Ursa as a particularly strong woman myself I suppose, putting up with marriage to a psychopath. Then again, when you are married to a psychopath who can firebend, what can you do? I'd be curious to see your take as to why Ursa married him in the first place actually - forced marriage in your opinion? Another one of Ozai's conquests for a trophy wife?
Of course Ursa's not entirely weak this is just my opinion after all. She did poison Azulon to keep Zuko alive (although if she poisoned Ozai it would have solved a lot of problems).
Its so sad and sweet how Ursa misses her children.
| KelpBass chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
LOVE! neeeeeeeed more! i'm so happy that this is being written i can even, oh! the feels!
| grandiose6 chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
I love sneaky Ursa!
And even though I can't get Toph's-nanny Ursa to be my headcanon because it is heartbreakingly ironic that the one person who could have told Zuko about his mom couldn't see and therefore recognize her...I still really want to see where you take their relationship.
| AJedistuckintheMatrix chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
nice and original!
| particularly good finder chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
OH MY LORD URSA TOPH THIS IS TOO PERFECT. LIKE, TOPH AND ZUKO HAVE SUCH SIMILAR PARENT ISSUES, AND URSA BEING THERE FOR BOTH OF THEM AND THEN HAVING TO LEAVE OH MY HEART. ALSO URSA BEING A SNEAKY NINJA LIKE HER SON SO PERFECT. AS YOU CAN TELL, THIS STORY IS ALREADY GIVING ME LOTS OF FEELS.
| Moonlitdaze chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
I love the idea. I love the writing! Everything is good. Keep it up!
| latinaintheblood chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
this is hilarious I love it please continue it.
| KnowledgeandImagination chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
lol, so much love for this story! I love hearing about all you have to say about ursa! hehe, love her sneakiness.
| Kelev chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
This is a BRILLIANT idea! I can't wait to read more!