|Reviews for A spoonful of sugar|
| bhut chapter 20 . 6/12/2013
Nice update, but it's should be "gone a long time" rather than "gone along time", you know? And BF trading with the FN is the biggest secret in the world, probably suspected even by the S1 pirates' lizard-bird, you know? Lol.
| 12Lionzroar12 chapter 20 . 6/12/2013
Brilliant! I can't wait for any of the updates! Great chapter! You still captivate me with your writing! looovveee ittttt :DDDDD
| Kimberly T chapter 20 . 6/12/2013
The Bei Fongs as secret collaborators... wow, that just sent shivers up my spine. Suppose they'd been willing to USE Toph instead of trying to shield her from everything: "Of course you may train in earthbending, but only on our estate. And we'll have to hire extra guards, to keep out the curious so you may train in complete privacy." And no one notices that the extra guards' helmets are shading gold eyes until it's too late...
I take it Nanny just learned, via eavesdropping on the visitors, about Prince Zuko's Agni Kai and what Fire Lord Ozai did to him afterwards. Ohhh, Ursa...
| muchachomomo chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
love it! i have a feeling that either the fire nation men recognized her, or she found out about Zuko's punishment. it makes sense, because Zuko found Aang 3 years after his banishment, which would make toph 9 at the time. it fits, but that's just my assumption as to why "nanny" was crying
| PrincessWraven chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
Ah, still loving this fic! I really like the idea and the plot, and I'm curious to know how things play out! Keep writing :)
| Oh I am Slain chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
a long time
that for one second"
that for one second."
Like usual, I really enjoy reading your characterizations. Cheers!
| Soten-ni-zase chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
You, you would, not only update but make such a heart-wrenching update while I'm trying to work on a story I've not touched in 4 years. (I am a terrible person)
Of course, I shouldn't have check my email 3
| AnnaAza chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
Poor Ursa! I could feel Toph's confusion but also total rising panic and horror through her worry of her nanny. I stumbled across the same theory and think it's interesting. Wouldn't that be some episode if the creators played around with that!
| Beloved Daughter chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
Thanks for another awesome chapter update! Poor Toph. I know how terrifying it can be when parents crack. Everything is alright as long as one's parent/parent figure is alright... But when that myth cracks...
Please update again soon!
| Astrid Goes For A Spin chapter 18 . 5/9/2013
I can't decide whether that Agni Kai was different, or if in your universe Ursa witnessed Zuko's.
| DonnadelLago chapter 19 . 4/29/2013
*clapping* (because words would just ruin it)
| MockerDelight chapter 19 . 4/29/2013
I love this story. It seems so real. My head is taken up with the thought of Zuko finding Ursa and Toph being all "Nanny"!
| muchachomomo chapter 19 . 4/28/2013
this is really good. its light stuff, nothing too dramatic, but at the same time it's interesting enough to keep me wondering what Ursa's gonna do next, or in the chance that Ursa leaves, what would toph do? really good story. 5/5 stars!
| Kimberly T chapter 19 . 4/27/2013
That mother-in-law is a vicious woman who should live just long enough to REGRET every unkindness she bestows for no good reason.
Sadly, methinks the end of this story is drawing near.
| NiceThorn chapter 19 . 4/27/2013
Yikes. Things are getting even more complicated and it is not looking so good for our favourite characters! Thankyou for another great update.