|Reviews for Entity|
| Ribke D'Crazy chapter 1 . 2/17
SLENDER MAN IS SANTA CLAWS!
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/30/2013
More please !
| Linoria chapter 10 . 10/24/2013
Just read all of it in one go.
I would really like to see more chapters in the future:)
Lots of love
| Kalavel Loki chapter 10 . 9/3/2013
Damnit! this was all so thrilling!
Well, I will wait for the next one 3.
And your brain has the material in him, i don't think you need to be actually palying this kind of things to writte it, i'm ure it will be great 3
| Kalavel Loki chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Slenderman and Loki, just, perfect (you don't know actually what a deja vu that caused XD)
| Kalavel Loki chapter 8 . 9/3/2013
i mut say, I'm reading this in ago
i should be sleeping, damnit!
but, this, this is perfection ;o;
the exact quantity of angst, terror, redemption, gore and the bit of fluff
(but i dearly hope it will end well)
| angrbodagiantess chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
I can't express how much I love the way the "entity" speaks- or whatever he's doing. Not just the weird capitalization thing (which is awesome btw) but his manner and the creepy way he tries to "convince" Loki of stuff. It's all just... yeah, creepy. ;D
I'm glad you're back with this story and I'm sure future chapters will be okay.
| Daku-DarkNess316 chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
nice story! very interesting cant wait to read more
| addicted2sasunaru chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
Each and every time I try to brace myself...that man...that thing always gets to me.
Your portrayal of "him" is sooo brilliant. Beautiful darling, glad your back ;-)
| Myrachan8 chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
When the last sentence was "got to sleep". The first thing I thought of WAS Jeff the Killer. Scary. *shiver* two scary creepy pasta stories in 's a lot to take in, and not only that but they BOTH have white faces, pour WHITE faces (one just lacking eyes, ears, nose, and mouth)
Hope to see the next chApter up soon, and what will become of loki
see yeah later
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
I like it!
| EvilConcubine chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
This was good. I hope to read more soon.
| addicted2sasunaru chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
No matter what happens know that I fully enjoyed this story :-)
I totally get where you're coming from, life happens and motivation becomes writer's block.
My mind is blank, but should something pop into my head you'll be the first to know darling 3
| Myrachan8 chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
I'll be staying with this story to the very end, even if it takes forever! So count me in!
Also, here's a song for your inspiration: Iridescent
Hope to see you soon!
| EvilConcubine chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
It's sad to know you have a writer's block, but I'm sure it'll be better soon. And, of course, I'm still waiting for you to continue the story.
I'll try to link you some music that often helps me to wake up my dark muse when I'm writing and drawing a dark stuff. It usually helps when you listen to it surrounded by darkness ;). It's an ambient music, so it's also not too distracting when you're busy. It scares some people, so I thought it's something your need for an inspiration.
: / /
w w w.
The first, the second and the third tracks are the best, imo. Tell me what you think.