Reviews for My Last Breath
Susu chapter 5 . 9/5
OK...first off, I loved the first story. I should've reviewed and I didn't, so sorry about that. Great take, though I skimmed over the parts that were relatively unchanged. I'm a bit hesitant about Maya. It seems so fanfic-y to have the protagonist be able to tame a wild animal that is forever loyal afterward. Kind of takes away the otherwise realism (well, as realistic as the Hunger Games may be). But still enjoying this and looking forward to getting through the rest over time!

By the way, your grammar and punctuation is generally very good, which is a pleasant surprise. You finished this years ago, so I don't know if you are even writing anymore, but if so, I have one bit of advice. "...walking in on Peeta and I …" "...eats dinner with Peeta and I..." Remember that 'I' is the subjective form and should only be used when it is the subject of the sentence. In both the cases I quoted here, it is the object and should be "walking in on Peeta and me" and "eats dinner with Peeta and me." Just remove Peeta (heaven forbid, I know!) to see how it sounds: "Eats dinner with I" vs. "eats dinner with me."
tasteslikespring chapter 35 . 8/5
YAAAAAAAS I LOVE IT YOURE AMAZING
hgfanaticeverlark chapter 35 . 7/31
great as always,now i will be re reading CROCS again
Terry4 chapter 1 . 5/24
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obsessedfreak chapter 12 . 4/17
Re-reading this fanfic for the 4th time :) So great! It’s even better than the original!
izzyandrews123 chapter 35 . 4/12
this was really great! I love the changes and the ending even of I do wish it could've been different but I understand. really great!
izzyandrews123 chapter 12 . 4/9
loving this. I love that you included more with their families especially peeta's
willowed.Jade chapter 35 . 3/28
I like this new spin on the characters' emotions! Looking forward to reading CROCS
Magic Mockingjays chapter 14 . 1/16
God that smackdown on Mrs. Mellark was epic!
BrownB chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
Plot hole: why didn’t Peeta just have Katniss cut the tracker out of his arm...? I know it would have been horrible as well, but at least he wouldn’t have been captured
baldcoder chapter 35 . 9/10/2017
Another good rewrite. Looking forward to number 3.
kjscnjsc chapter 15 . 8/25/2017
GURL I LOVE U SO MUCH, NOT ONLY U WROTE THIS BOMB FANFIC BUT THESE AVENGERS AND IRON MAN QUOTES AJHDUSJFNCKSJCWJDVBDS I LIVE OKAY I LIVE
SunsetRainbow084 chapter 11 . 8/24/2017
AVENGERS QUOTE AKSJJSNDJSJDJXKDJDKDNFMDKSKSMS
SunsetRainbow084 chapter 10 . 8/24/2017
IRON MAN ANSNJWNSHSNSHSNSNS
xxxlol chapter 8 . 8/24/2017
AVENGERS NDCJNDKJCNDEKJVNRNCKJENCF MAH BEBIESSSSSSSSSSSSS
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