|Reviews for My Last Breath|
| Kaitlyn chapter 30 . 6/11
Triangle? Illuminati inspired? Sike. Nice chapter though. I'm lovin' it. ;) _
| Everafter4 chapter 28 . 6/10
Loving every minute of this! You're very talented! :)
| Quxxn.katniss.mellark chapter 35 . 5/30
AAAAAAAAAHHH omg! I know I'm about a year or two late, but that was amazing! I was whispering to myself telling Peeta not to go, and I feel like I might die. But it was a good story!
| xxchelzeaxx chapter 3 . 4/30
I've always wanted a pet wolf, kind of jealous not gonna lie
| XenaTheDog chapter 35 . 4/6
Can I just tell you how amazing this story is? Please don't stop now. Update soon :) 3.
| redbanker chapter 35 . 3/25
Wow. Okay great job. And you totally fixed it and quickly too so you rock for that as well. I know I should have reviewed each chapter but I was too busy trying to read the next chapter. Heading off to the third installment now.
| Ben and Jerry's Icecream Cone chapter 1 . 2/21
I loved loved the first story, but icouldn't review at the end like i planned becasue you left me on a massive cliff hanger so I am making up for it now. I wasn't sure about the sligh hange in character at first but I do like it now- it just took a bit of getting used too. Good writing.
| Abi117 chapter 1 . 1/27
Okay, I'm close to start hyperventilating, OH MY GODNESS! What a wonderful story! I have no words to describe how much I liked this story and how much I enjoyed it! The love story between Katniss and Peeta is really epic! I read it in only two days! I couldnt stop! I cant stop wondering what you have prepared for the third part of this wonderful story. I have to say it, I like this fanfics more than the original books, so much more! I'm gonna start CROCR right away but first I also wanted to tell you that I enjoyed very much your ANs, they're pretty epic too hahahaha. And I'm wondering about that trilogy you wanted to write, you did it? I hope you publish it because I'm definitely reading it! Keep us informed :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
This fanfic is just simply awesome!
| Aquasira chapter 8 . 1/19
I love how you insert so many events that didn't exist in the original book. Having Peeta and Katniss fall more in love after the games is beautiful. Keep being wonderful!
| Melissa72 chapter 17 . 1/19
Whoa...this was waaay more than T rating dude. I'm glad they waited until they were married via District 12 style but please refrain from writing smut-light. You've lost my readership now b/c I can't trust that you won't pull this again. You've got a talent...a talent given to you by God...make Him proud by it by making it modest, pure and real. The souls of your readers are at stake, as is yours...lust never helped anyone. Not that what K and P did was purely lust...but you need to be careful that you don't trigger lust in your readers by writing porn.
See if you can edit out the impure bits...I don't want you having to be responsible for this when you meet Our Lord. Trust Him and His ways to become the writer you were meant to be:) God bless
| SeleneAherne chapter 35 . 1/18
Wow! Love love love this!
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/14
Jingle bells, quarter quells, happy Hunger Games! Peeta dies, Katniss cries and Finnick saves the day!
This is amazing! The only thing I can fault you on is that maple syrup doesn't come out of the tree like the way it looks in the containers; it's a clear sap that is more like water. But hey, I only learned that last week and it's definitely irrelevant to this amazing rewrite; one of the best I've read. Question: what about bugs? I know that they are mentioned a handful of times in the books, so I'm wondering how Haymitch was able to talk about 13 (and K and P, for that matter) in their houses and the Capitol.
| Acia Granger chapter 35 . 1/4
NO! NO! PEEEEEEEEEEEEETAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! I CAN'T STOP CRYING! 'Daddy's going to keep you safe..." Oh my god. I loved this story so so so much! You're writing has grown so much throughout the first and second story- you can see it;) They're truly amazing. I am SO glad my sister forced me to sit down and read 'someone to watch over me' :D
| Acia Granger chapter 34 . 1/4
WAAAAAA! PEETA! NEARLY THE LAST TIME WE ACTUALLY REALLY SEE THE BOY WITH THE BREAD!'WAILS'