Reviews for You Have the Right to Remain Sexy
Heidi9 chapter 2 . 7/11/2016
Wow, hot!
Lf chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Awesome!
RockerPrincess83 chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
simply wonderful. just as amazing as the first chapter. always a pleasure :)
Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
this was soooooo good! please write more!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
So hot. I need a fan and a dildo
rocklesson86 chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
Some very hot sex between Finchel.
AliasCSINYFriendsER chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
Holy CRAP that was AMAZING and oh so very hot! Good lord! So glad I work alone on weekends because umm yeah...that wouldn't have been safe for reading in front of others. Lmao!

LOVE!

-mandi
TrixieSparkleFirecracker chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Oh wow that was so hot... please update soon
noro chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
another chapter well done
the laws of may chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Congratulations on your yeast infection, Rachel Berry!

This was well-written, in the sense words were in the correct places and grammar was pretty much sufficient, but every single smut cliché is in here. It's very purple. Women do not have "cores". Apples have "cores". And "slit" implies there is no hole entirely. You could really benefit with using less flowery language.

Also, I counted "stubbly jaw" about ten times. Geez, Finn, go and shave? Have you ever had someone with stubble go down on you? It's not exactly the pleasant sort of itch.

Finally, is Rachel's clit a magic orgasm button? I would be exploding if someone did that. In pain.

And sleeping in the wet patch. Eew. What a birthday present for Rachel.
sourilove chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
I loved it !
Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
good job!like always!
Loveydoveface chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Wow! That was so good!
May chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Love it ! Update asap -
besos
Amybf19 chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
I love Finchel! That is all! :)
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