|Reviews for Mín eneth, mín tûr - Our name, our victory|
| ToryIsConfusedDotCom chapter 8 . 8/1/2013
Oh no! I totally understand where you are coming from though :) I really want to start my hobbit story, but have decided that I won't until my LOTR one is finished, as it would be too much. I look forward to Faelwen's journey to resume!
| ToryIsConfusedDotCom chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
Sorry for the late review! I was at a 3 day dressage championship with no Internet! This chapter was very good :) I love the interactions with Legolas and Faelwen :3 and how could you leave it on a cliffhanger?! Gah I need to read the next chapter now!
| Live.Laugh.Love chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Hi again! I just posted a review (my full own name is . .music but it did net fit in the 'name' box.) and I'm reviewing in anon mode because you can't review one chapter more than once when you are signed in.
I just wanted to add to my precious review and say that this is very good writing, especially since English isn't your mother language! Seriously, you are better at writing in English than a lot of people on this site who have English as their first language!
I also love that you have an actual elven name for your character - a lot of people don't bother doing that type of research and just add 'iel' to their favourite name! So well done for some fabulous work and good planning!
| Live.Laugh.Love.Listen.Music chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Firstly, welcome to the LotR fandom! It's great to have new authors here and I hope you enjoy yourself writing here!
Secondly, just a bit of constructive criticism here - elves age much more slowly than humans do. A twelve year old elf is the equivalent of a five year old human. Basically, elves reach physical maturity at the age of fifty and are considered as 'of age' when they turn 100. So, if you want to convert a human age to the equivalent in elven age, you multiply it by 2.5 so the equivalent of a human twelve year old is a thirty year old elf. I hope this helps in some way! And I'm sorry if this seems a bit weird - I'm slightly fanatical when it comes to details!
I hope you have great fun writing!
| Tory chapter 6 . 7/4/2013
Aww poor Faelwen! What was she doing, I wonder? I love her interactions with Legolas, the are just so adorable! The things that are on Legolas' mind... Is he Fae's father? Just speculation ;) can't wait for the update!
| Narnia and Harry Potter 4 EVER chapter 6 . 7/4/2013
I know that she has some powers but age an atlest try to be safe she almost gave me a heart attack doing that!
| Ilovevollyball chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
So, I have discovered this tenth walker story and I actually like it !
And I can't believe this isn't your mother tongue ! I could never ever write something this good in a different language !
And so I say , bravo ! Serr goot ! Well done !
Can't wait till ya update !
P.s. lol ! There taking the hobbits to isengard gard gard gard ! I love that video in fact it's been stuck in my head all week (showed it to my little cousin who absolutely loves legolas , she thought it was an insult to her hero ! I think she still liked it secretly ) .
| katiebug17 chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
Sorry you are upset! Take your time, we can wait :)
| Narnia and Harry Potter 4 EVER chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
Wow this is a,along I love it!
| Ellie Elf chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
I am really enjoying your story, so glad I found it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter - hope that writers block stays away. : )
| ToryIsConfused chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
Yay! An update! The fellowship are finally on their way! :) I loved Faelwen's spar with Boromir. The "stick 'em with the pointy end" made me laugh! Your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to find out more about what is going on in Legolas' head... Hmm? ;) wonderful update!
Can't wait til next time my friend!
| ToryIsConfused chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
Awww this was sooo good! I love how you've incorperated the hobbit into it :) Aaaah! I want to read more! So happy that Faelwen is related to both Kili and Thorin :D
P.s I am so sorry it took me so long to read the chapter! Yeasterday turned out to be manick and I had no time at all! Fabulous chapter, well done! xxx
| ToryIsConfusedDotCom chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
Ooooh the plot is thickening! What is so special about Faelwen I wonder :D I really do love this story, and you are an amazing writer considering english isn't your mother-tongue :O I believe the lyrics at the beginning were Eyes Open by Taylor Swift
-Tory :) xx
| Shannon the Original chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
This is so good update soon
| Typewriter101 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
keep writing, very good