Reviews for The Mighty Kyon
YFIQ chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
It's good, too bad this fic is a bit too "low-key", get it? Low-key as in...never mind. The point is that it deserves a bit more attention.
Shadowmancer42 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
This story has great potential. PLEASE continue it! Thanks.
Full-Paragon chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Common sense... Tinging... Must... Snark...

To bad you seem to have abandoned this fic, it has a great deal of potential!
Heaven Canceler chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Oh! This is awesome. You absolutely have to continue this story! I demand it in the name of all fanfic lovers. (Don't take this too seriously. I just think this story is ludicrously funny.) Are you only going to make this a Thor crossover, or do you plan other crosses. For example: Marvel, DC or something similar. Or maybe something that would explain the cybor ninja penguin, namely, Kore wa Zombie dezu ka!
Garr33 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I demand cyborg ninja penguin NAOW!:D
Genericrandom chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
A solid 9/10. It may not be the best example of writing but the most important part of an intro/prologue you outdid with style. You walked up to our attention, grabbed by the throat, kneed it in the gut and hit in the back of the head before dragging it off and tying it up for the duration of this intro.
lucifer.94 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Cool work...
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Rybalov chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Ashar chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Well... what should I say. You're hardly the first to give Kyon supernatural or superweird powers... and even if Norse mythology is not my forte, I've liked what I read, yet the problem up to what I have read of your fanfic (the mere first chapter, I know...) is that you're narrating a story, not writing a story. It's different the same way explaining how to pilot a plane and showing how to pilot a plane is different.
I guess when the introductory chapters of how Kyon became his universe's Thunderer will be over, then we'll see if your story with him and his borrowed powers in the SOS dan will pan out. REALLY hope you're going to do something good with this.
FurikoMaru chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
*waves* Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see if Thor!Kyon ends up speaking courtly Japanese or Sengoku-manly-talk as part of a translation-convention gone wrong and confusing everyone. Just the thought of him calling Haruhi 'ko-musume' to her face...! XD
alethiophile chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Well. This thing looks...interesting.

Will be watching with mild amusement.
shanejayell chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Nice. :D